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风之语

勿妄言
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Posted: 2009-11-13 20:49:07 Post subject: 风之语

风拂细柳湾，霞染扁舟舷。樱缀黄花后，蔷攀小窗前。远峰叠绿翠，落日漾春涟。寂寞草庐舍，闲眠绮梦阡。 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2009-11-13 21:40:08 Post subject:

风是多情的风，霞是多情的霞，樱、蔷、远峰、落日、草庐无一不情致，因而，语也好，梦也罢，俱是美好的情。问好，勿妄言君。

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Posted: 2009-11-15 02:12:23 Post subject:

勿妄言 wrote:

风拂细柳湾，霞染扁舟舷。
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短小聚雅，我也有《风之语》物语系列之二。是絮叨长调。不及先生多矣。向勿妄兄学习！
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Posted: 2009-11-15 18:40:27 Post subject:

景緻情豐! 問好勿妄言! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-11-15 20:20:05 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

勿妄言 wrote:

风拂细柳湾，霞染扁舟舷。
...

短小聚雅，我也有《风之语》物语系列之二。是絮叨长调。不及先生多矣。向勿妄兄学习！

拜谢方天驻足！只闻兄称妄言为“先生”一语，呵呵.........汗！兄真乃贵人也。问候兄，身体可曾康复？望请释怀保重！⌒〓⌒
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2009-11-15 20:22:52 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

景緻情豐!
問好勿妄言!

谢先生点评！于五言，妄言实为初学者，今后还望承先生多多指教！
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

勿妄言
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Posted: 2009-11-15 20:25:13 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

风是多情的风，霞是多情的霞，樱、蔷、远峰、落日、草庐无一不情致，因而，语也好，梦也罢，俱是美好的情。问好，勿妄言君。

问好米兄！诚如兄所言，无论是风或是梦，亦或草木，美终还是在内心。
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2009-11-15 21:31:48 Post subject:

勿妄言,相互交流,樂也融融! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-11-19 22:34:36 Post subject:

勿妄言 wrote:

拜谢方天驻足！只闻兄称妄言为“先生”一语，呵呵.........汗！兄真乃贵人也。问候兄，身体可曾康复？望请释怀保重！⌒〓⌒

不敢枉认。问好湄姐！
是连休了四个多月，还得悠着来。谢谢关爱！
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