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刮鬍刀
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PostPosted: 2009-11-07 09:13:26    Post subject: 刮鬍刀 Reply with quote

水田映照山色
清晰如一面鏡子

想必昨夜又有宿醉的漢子
夜半偷偷種下失意的莊稼
一夜揠苗助長
草稈子硬是長得又硬又長

別怪我一把鏽了的鐮刀
日復一日清理著
你下巴上這塊肥沃的田地
怎有不偶而失手割破土地的時候
怎有不偶而遺漏幾枝的時候

至於你說過的美麗稻子
十幾年來
我倒是沒見它發過
幾枝?
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PostPosted: 2009-11-07 10:14:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

春风刮过
水皱了
美麗的稻子,在你手下
一次次复生
又一次次倒下

刽子手啊,又何止是你
的刮鬍刀

春风刮过
水又平展展的发出
几枝


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PostPosted: 2009-11-07 23:06:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

楼上两位对胡子都深有体会~~~

一楼的胡子长势凶猛却比较辛苦~剃刀不够锋利?

二楼的胡子春风吹又生~~剃刀似斩刀~~
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-11-09 04:21:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 哈哈,如果下巴上长满了稻子,倒是不错的事情。
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劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2009-11-09 22:27:06    Post subject: pingdao Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
春风刮过
...


hepingdao

是的!
如此又引申出很多劊子手
歲月的劊子手
愛情的劊子手
........

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PostPosted: 2009-11-10 05:51:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
楼上两位对胡子都深有体会~~~
...

安紅紅:

男人的成長
從不知道什麼是鬍子到
不知道該如何處理鬍子到
每天都離不開它
卻也不是如此在乎它

鬍子像影子
天天跟著
卻每天只願意花3分鐘跟他寒暄

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劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2009-11-10 06:02:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
Very Happy 哈哈,如果下巴上长满了稻子,倒是不错的事情。


杯中沖浪

如果下巴長滿了稻子
就不怕餓死了
哈哈!

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