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新诗 – 破校

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2009-11-06 10:40:45 Post subject: 新诗 – 破校

破校魏鹏展油漆剥落后露出锈迹的电铃再没有响起破玻璃窗口看到白中带啡的吊扇没有转曾经充满孩童喧闹的操场上长出了绿草不知何时那充满锈痕的铁丝网开了洞口七八个青年穿过铁网洞踏着操场上的杂草吶喊声和喝采声添加了新的空气一球飞上楼上新的一堆的玻璃碎片盖着旧的无人收拾一只蟋蟀从草丛中跳出从破窗爬进了课室 2009年10月25日夜 _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

安红红
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Posted: 2009-11-07 23:08:43 Post subject:

这学校应该是废弃不用的了~~够破~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2009-11-07 23:22:03 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

这学校应该是废弃不用的了~~够破~

對呀，香港出生率逐年減低，政府不斷殺校。學校停辦後，就是人去樓空，一片荒涼。
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香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄：
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html

魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

白水
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Posted: 2009-11-08 12:08:15 Post subject:

写得活灵活现

孔令滨
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Posted: 2009-11-08 22:42:49 Post subject:

赏读！问好…… _________________ 能够交心的地方不必在乎有多远，只要相信诗是亲近所得，倾心所得，用简单的文字诉最深最真的情！【80后】

孔令滨
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Posted: 2009-11-08 22:43:38 Post subject:

赏读！问好…… _________________ 能够交心的地方不必在乎有多远，只要相信诗是亲近所得，倾心所得，用简单的文字诉最深最真的情！【80后】

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-11-09 04:06:55 Post subject:

如果为写破而破，没有异议。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-11-09 04:08:11 Post subject:

如果为写破而破，没有异议。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2009-11-09 20:18:16 Post subject:

謝謝各位閱讀拙作﹗ _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

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