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年少时
雪泥
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 04:04:34    Post subject: 年少时 Reply with quote

年少时
文/雪泥

你还记得我们走过的雪原?
灰颓的天空
从黎明至黄昏挂着不变的容颜。
你和我手牵手
眨着濡湿的睫毛
于苍茫间跌跌撞撞。

为何
我们不是猎隼翱翔到先祖的坟前?
为何
自生后便是肉的凌辱,灵的毁灭?
他们抚弄着伎俩的铁链,
满世黄尘里
炫耀灼灼银光。

我戴着年少时的百合
走在异乡的原野上。
风雪里是否有一盏灯为我而悲戚?
……

2006-6-9
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亦先寒
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 05:16:21    Post subject: 呵呵 Reply with quote

俺还是不评为好。唉,最近实在写不出东东来,只想骂人。怎么着就整不出一个老爷子们来,糗得很那糗得很。争取多看几个帖子了。
问好各位,你们最近如何啊?
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喜红
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Joined: 02 Jun 2006
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Location: 中国吉林
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 06:16:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

我戴着年少时的百合
走在异乡的原野上。
风雪里是否有一盏灯为我而悲戚?
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这种意境令人难以忘怀.问好雪泥总版.
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缪斯.您的智慧为我的人生道路增添光明.
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雪泥
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 06:32:26    Post subject: Re: 呵呵 Reply with quote

亦先寒 wrote:
俺还是不评为好。唉,最近实在写不出东东来,只想骂人。怎么着就整不出一个老爷子们来,糗得很那糗得很。争取多看几个帖子了。
问好各位,你们最近如何啊?

骂人不太文明,还是写诗发泄一下好些。
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尹士林
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 15:42:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

我戴着年少时的百合
走在异乡的原野上。
风雪里是否有一盏灯为我而悲戚?
……
最喜欢这几句。
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忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
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乐园成也
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 17:03:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

深沉有力:))问好!提给大家
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郁雪
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PostPosted: 2006-06-10 03:03:53    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

你和我手牵手
眨着濡湿的睫毛
于苍茫间跌跌撞撞。

回忆
有辛酸
有甜蜜
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陈欣
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PostPosted: 2006-06-11 05:13:33    Post subject: 提读! Reply with quote

问好,雪泥

我戴着年少时的百合
走在异乡的原野上。
风雪里是否有一盏灯为我而悲戚?
……
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魏晋风度
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PostPosted: 2006-06-11 23:52:39    Post subject: 欣赏! Reply with quote

吟罢低眉!
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致梵高(原创) 我用原始人的石器 砸断自己的血管 把我浓黑的血 染成黄色 让你去涂抹 星空和麦田 我将你的生命 逆转 让你死亡 一千年
而后 只活一天
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