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独白
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Location: 中国张家港
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PostPosted: 2009-10-25 04:22:04    Post subject: 独白 Reply with quote

文/江苏 中海

◎别即空

这些年出于私心,我一直在刨地
种文字,听泥土讲故事
读读秋风里长出的忧伤
泥土能不能让旧事物发芽
发芽的事物能不能开一次花
宗教举着因果的大旗
下一回,就应验这个传说
泥土深处,一部心经隐隐作痛

◎远亦近

你和一滴水远涉重洋
带回一些新物种
亲嘴鱼触礁,搁浅
恋情爬上岸,沙砾们耳鬓厮磨
细碎的声音退到大海
我们能忆到的就这些
天空卸下星星以后
一切都白了:远是近的参照
你——,是我的参照

◎深处物

是什么止于水,呼吸么?
我在你的呼吸里窒息过
一去二十年,一棵垂柳把心都掏空了
还抵达不了水的内心
图书馆里的爱情齐整地排列着
在北方,那么多的桥不谙水性
你从容地取走这些证据
在南方,我要下到鱼的深度
才能摸到一块爱情的骨头

◎后来事

除了刨地,我还在挖坑
埋葬一些事物,再种上一些事物
你的承诺一直没有发芽
村东的槐树年年开花
年年,未能挂果
秋风已经疯了,再也吹不醒
苍老的记忆
有人说,村西的杏好些年没开花了
不知怎么,在眼下的北风里
竟开出一朵桃花来

◎独白

现在要呈现一个场景
树林、教室、军帽、你和我
雪落在北方的表情里
微风细腻地吹
画外音里的一段独白
正好是一个冬天的长度
爱着并为之留痕
此时我仍在路上,是最后一个
撤离场景的人

(中海地址:215614 江苏张家港市凤凰镇政府 中海)
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一山
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PostPosted: 2009-10-25 09:27:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得很有灵性,建议都来读读!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-26 08:28:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

捉住内心深处的感受~~细致~
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zhangmin
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PostPosted: 2009-10-27 21:10:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 01:15:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

这些年出于私心,我一直在刨地
种文字,听泥土讲故事
读读秋风里长出的忧伤
泥土能不能让旧事物发芽
发芽的事物能不能开一次花
宗教举着因果的大旗
下一回,就应验这个传说
泥土深处,一部心经隐隐作痛
。。。。。。。。。。沉稳,内敛,来自内心体验的一组,精华。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 01:43:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

体验的忧伤...
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 09:45:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习。
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