齐遂林
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 Posted: 2009-10-17 15:34:40 Post subject: 大梁门（自度曲） |
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何时称西门？十里沙尘迷人眼，遍地朽骨筑荒坟。北望处，灌木乱，老鸦飞，鬼火深。黄汴河一抹，独木桥上，老了行人。唯有余韵忆后主，庄里农户，多为南唐臣。
卅年去，再重游，楼如云。柳垂碧色风飒飒，花扶斜阳水粼粼。城头上，频频彩旗换，一夜一精神。最是秋来菊写意，大街小巷着彩裙。题匾额，老叟小丫亦瘦金。
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2009-10-18 12:42:23 Post subject: |
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妙哉“最是秋来菊写意”
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2009-10-18 12:43:01 Post subject: |
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妙哉“最是秋来菊写意”
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 03:06:51 Post subject: |
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| 同感，亦喜“题匾额，老叟小丫亦瘦金。 ”好词，欣赏了！ |
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冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2009-11-03 13:26:35 Post subject: |
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章法井然，音韵天成，好词!
“独木桥上，老了行人
“城头上，频频彩旗换，一夜一精神
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