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这里的夜
俞伟远
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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 19:16:40    Post subject: 这里的夜 Reply with quote

这里的夜

黑的或明亮的夜
冷峻。不慌不忙
伸出手
像我一样醒着
我们不说话不用说话

它的手自然地伸过来
慢慢剥我
剥开我洗我
有脏的不怀好意的心思
就加入几声或多点的虫鸣
轻敲又搓来揉去
执著地把我洗净洗轻
顺便涂上泥土的香

我们想睡时就一起睡了
睡着睡着,有众鸟
不知从哪里飞出
啄破夜色,一起使劲鸣叫扑腾
天,会忽一下亮了
2009-10-11夜
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 02:05:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻,沉静~问好伟远!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 08:02:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑的或明亮的夜
冷峻。不慌不忙
伸出手
像我一样醒着
我们不说话不用说话

起笔这段引人入胜~~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-14 15:32:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好明月和安红红,谢谢你们的鼓励!
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