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白瓷罐(外二首)投几首小诗,请各位师友指正
祁鸿升
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PostPosted: 2009-09-13 01:52:47    Post subject: 白瓷罐(外二首)投几首小诗,请各位师友指正 Reply with quote

白瓷罐

(外二首)

中国江苏 祁鸿升

1、白瓷罐



白瓷罐

装满了许多局促的呼吸。



灯光在上面跳动。

纤亮的小脚,

踩得白亮的寂寞

叮当叮当地作响。



谁衣袂飘飞,白瓷罐

装满了更多局促的呼吸。



2、夜鸟



许多鸟在夜色里飞,

它们呀呀的叫声,

很响很黑。



它们继续叫,

天空就继续黑。

大片的黑,没有细节,

也没有可以打开的门窗。



我是另一只鸟,

想隐藏自己。

又想从黑黑的叫声里,

吐出一丝光亮。



3、小幸福



到了星期五。

我把幸福放在草茎上。



一点点的幸福,

它在更低处绽开零星的花,

打扮春天。



风从内心吹来,

我已无法言说。

一朵又一朵摇曳的幸福,

颤栗不止。
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骨笛
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Joined: 03 Jan 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-09-13 02:12:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

一点点的幸福,

它在更低处绽开零星的花,

打扮春天。
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我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2009-09-13 23:44:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

风从内心吹来,

我已无法言说。

一朵又一朵摇曳的幸福,

颤栗不止。



写的干净,有回味。
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半溪明月
榜眼


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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 03:37:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好祁老师,你有另一组更好的发来我们欣赏哈~
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