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PostPosted: 2009-06-04 05:45:01    Post subject: Lost Reply with quote

Lost

At a loon's call,
I search for you
in the whispers
of reeds that sway,
blurring my view.
By a path,
a hopping frog
leads me to
a misty river,
in the ruffling water
I hear you,
an alluring voice.
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2009-06-14 11:49:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

May "Lake" find the happiness of the nature? Not the "lost"? Thanks! I enjoy it.
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Lake
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PostPosted: 2009-06-14 12:06:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you William for the read and the nice response. Glad you liked it.

Lost and found, I suppose.

Cheers,

Lake
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PostPosted: 2009-06-17 17:15:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

At a loon's call,
I search for you
in the whispers
of reeds that sway,
blurring my view.
By a path,
a hopping frog
leads me to
a misty river,
in the ruffling water
I hear you,
an alluring voice.


How beautiful it is! I enjoy it very much .Good day ,Lake.
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张南城
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PostPosted: 2009-09-06 23:25:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

LAKE 先生:请教:“loon's call”在诗歌中的意思是什么?您用英语解释也可以。谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 11:41:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

loon 是明尼苏达州的州鸟,我们称之为“潜鸟”。 call 这里是cry 鸣叫的意思。

Thanks for your interest in my poem.
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PostPosted: 2009-09-08 19:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢你的注解。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 22:20:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

LAKE,我又试着翻译了一篇,请指教。




总是
在潜鸟啼鸣声中
企图寻觅你
芦苇的窃窃私语
使感觉聚焦
混乱了
幽径
与跳动着的
青蛙



迷雾笼罩的河
在一片被人弄皱了的
水中
我听到了

一个让我心动的
声音
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Lake
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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 14:56:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mr. Zhang,

Please check your mail box.

Lake
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