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* 芳 菲 岁 月 * --- (八 )
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 13:57:52    Post subject: * 芳 菲 岁 月 * --- (八 ) Reply with quote

* * 芳 菲 岁 月 * *
. . . . . ( 八 ) . . . . .
. . . 七 彩 人 生 . . .
< 調 寄 定 風 波 >

一 樹 青 苹 帶 醉 紅 ,
两 畦 油 菜 綠 葱 葱 .
三 面 籬 笆 花 錦 簇 ,
馨 郁 ,
四 時 蜂 蝶 舞 芳 叢 .

五 部 儒 經 窗 下 誦 ,
情 縱 ,
六 安 香 茗 伴 詩 衷 .
七 彩 人 生 歌 韵 茂 ,
同 奏 ,
八 音 唱 和 樂 融 融 !
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 14:02:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

巧妙!真逍遥之白云闲人!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 14:29:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

在爽風輕拂下,望着後園婆娑的青苹果樹,正處成熟季節,果實累累,個個胖乎乎,帶着醉妃般嫣紅; 地上栽種的两畦油菜,葱綠得可愛; 三面籬畔,嬌黄姹紫的花叢,正吸引一群彩蝶痴蜂!
在花香鳥語中,閒坐窗前,边賞園中清景,边讀五經(詩.書.易.禮.春秋,五经也); 一杯濃濃的六安香茶,陪伴着詩興,把眼前的怡人風光,赋詩作曲,抒發七彩人生的胸臆; 舒指輕弹,一曲琴音(八音乃古時對樂器的總称)讓心聲随風蕩漾,樂也融融!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 14:32:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝bannong的欣賞!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 17:05:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

一、二、三、四、五、六、七、八。数字连缀得如此自然,真正七彩人生。悠闲如斯,多彩如斯,儒雅如斯。白云兄,真让人羡煞。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 06:02:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝运刚的贊誉!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 06:03:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

数字入词,连缀自然,确实不易,值得称慕。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 06:12:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

运刚:
闲來阅读一下儒經,坛添一絲雅緻之趣,賦起诗來便感自如
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 06:19:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏君!
我只是把眼前的風景,心中的感触,序列到詞中.請多指导!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-05 03:21:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云兄的经验,此言十分有理,吾当尽力为之。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-05 04:31:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

运刚客氣了!
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