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动物系列——兔1

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
Posts: 907
Location: 芝加哥
非马Collection

Posted: 2009-09-01 06:41:31 Post subject: 动物系列——兔1

兔1 溜出月宫到凡间来偷吃新长的菜心今天早上妻又在指桑骂槐我却只闷声在肚子里为嫦娥叫屈 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

燕庄生铁
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Joined: 06 May 2007
Posts: 116

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Posted: 2009-09-01 07:18:17 Post subject:

生活，情趣。诗句明白晓畅，奥意从结构上出。问好非马先生。

博弈
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Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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Posted: 2009-09-01 07:55:59 Post subject:

哈哈，我的讀法：第一段是非馬夫人晨起觀看菜園所發。這嫦娥是非馬先生肚子裡的詩，這槐，當然就是詩人先生了。瞎讀。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2009-09-01 14:52:50 Post subject:

写的形象，问好老师/

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
Posts: 907
Location: 芝加哥
非马Collection

Posted: 2009-09-01 15:18:45 Post subject:

燕庄生铁,博弈,赵福治三位好! 谢谢阅读. 喜欢博弈的读法.哈哈! _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
Posts: 907
Location: 芝加哥
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Posted: 2009-09-02 03:38:56 Post subject:

在另一个论坛上有位读者指出这诗拖了条尾巴, 再读果然, 所以把它去掉了.希望不至于太影响博弈的想象力. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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