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给老师敬个军礼
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PostPosted: 2009-08-20 16:00:06    Post subject: 给老师敬个军礼 Reply with quote

虽说教师节已经过去近两月,作为教师的,真想给我的老师写点什么,但是,所有的优秀词汇,全部被我的学生们用尽,到我想写的时候,实在没有新颖语言,对于我,又不想重复别人的话语,还要表达一番对自己老师的崇敬心情,所以,只好敬一个端正的军礼:

我并不是军人
此时
要用威武的军姿
向老师敬个礼

您是位艺术家
曾将
原本是一捧泥土的我
轻轻掬起
用灵巧的手
塑成一尊陶器
再带我在知识的炼炉中
经受热烈的洗礼
于是
才有我今天的形状
才庄重而严肃地
回报
一个威严的军姿
——向您敬个礼

颜色在我手中
无法表现您的伟岸
只能用浓重的墨
和抑制不住的泪水
一笔笔
涂染着您的白发
一滴滴
填补着您的皱纹
让浓重的墨和泪水
映照出您辉煌的履历
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PostPosted: 2009-08-23 11:45:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师的白发天下桃李永远的牵挂
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PostPosted: 2009-09-01 00:24:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

教师节就要来了,让我向所有的教师,致以崇高的敬礼!
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