Lake
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 Posted: 2009-01-16 05:31:14 Post subject: To B |
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To B
our last summer
fades into fluffy snow
butterflies in dreams
dawn
candle blown off -
you're gone...
moonlit night
a lone tarn gently rocks
a tired boat
a robin sings
with a coarse voice -
delight in despair
in foggy sunshine
how beautiful
blooming camellia!
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2009-01-17 15:15:21 Post subject: |
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一段浪漫的游程，一个美丽的回忆。
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-01-21 16:15:37 Post subject: |
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William，谢谢来读及留言。
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张南城
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| Posted: 2009-08-09 21:55:52 Post subject: |
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To B
our last summer
fades into fluffy snow
butterflies in dreams
dawn
candle blown off -
you're gone...
moonlit night
a lone tarn gently rocks
a tired boat
a robin sings
with a coarse voice -
delight in despair
in foggy sunshine
how beautiful
blooming camellia!
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给B
去年
夏日的颜色
渐渐淡去
化成绒柔的
雪花样的蝴蝶了
不时地
翩然
飞进梦里
当烛台的灯花
被黎明的光
吹灭了
你便悄然地
离去
离去…
寂静的湖水
温和的石岸
一只倦意的
小船
停靠在
风花雪月的
夜中
知更鸟的嗓音
已经嘶哑
可它依然
用粗糙地喉咙
无奈地
歌唱了
阳光在朦胧之中
被唤醒
如约到来
思
宛如
无比美丽盛开着的
山茶花了
（喜欢这首诗就翻译了。请指正。） |
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-08-23 10:38:08 Post subject: |
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谢谢张南城！
刚刚度假回来，未及时答谢，请见谅！
很喜欢你的译文，不拘囿于原文，且在原文基础上进一步发挥，使原文增色。
你的译文有泰戈尔小诗的韵味。
谢谢！
Lake
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张南城
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| Posted: 2009-08-27 04:37:31 Post subject: |
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谢谢张南城！
刚刚度假回来，未及时答谢，请见谅！
很喜欢你的译文，不拘囿于原文，且在原文基础上进一步发挥，使原文增色。
你的译文有泰戈尔小诗的韵味。
谢谢！
Lake |
Lake 你好。 我是喜欢你的诗才译的，也是学习。你的诗给人想象的空间多，也就按我的理解翻译了。你觉得行，我喜欢，对我也是个鼓励。谢谢。
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-08-28 09:57:58 Post subject: |
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Looking forward to your English poems, Mr Zhang.
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张南城
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| Posted: 2009-08-30 03:57:51 Post subject: |
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| Dear Lake, thank you very much. I still can not write English poetry. |
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