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寵物

博弈
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Posted: 2009-05-23 07:45:58 Post subject: 寵物

寵物你記住每一個主人的習性與氣味如何玩耍, 如何擁抱, 如何擺尾你和同類不太往來帶你散步, 若遇到同類可能相聞問, 可能互瞄教堂店前, 我讓你在外頭等等因為門口寫著”寵物不得入內” _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2009-05-23 09:37:54 Post subject:

绝妙

博弈
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Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
博弈Collection

Posted: 2009-05-23 10:26:50 Post subject:

我們相信狗的多重忠心不信人的多重忠實人所耽溺的種種時有為禮法所不許自由與秩序之間,人在拿捏但不知被擺佈的做何感想? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

遛达的七七
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Joined: 07 Jun 2006
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Posted: 2009-05-23 15:45:26 Post subject: 有没有哪个狗狗肯宠爱我？

有就站出来

博弈
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Posted: 2009-05-24 07:43:01 Post subject:

那就來吧, 讓我疼妳一晚只要你想到, 哪裡都能去 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

sfiawong
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Joined: 05 May 2009
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Location: US/HK
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Posted: 2009-05-24 16:21:28 Post subject:

呵出於無奈, 妙極的真情表現! 我也有篇"忠心義犬的故事" 貼在散文小說處! 是"我家一只忠心的义犬"! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-05-25 13:41:05 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

那就來吧, 讓我疼妳一晚
只要你想到, 哪裡都能去
Laughing

我总是按耐不住。也不是真想按耐住。

而你总能潜伏得很好　 Razz

湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2009-05-27 15:34:29 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2009-08-24 16:14:48 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦 wrote:

你也是诗人?

博弈
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Location: SFO
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Posted: 2009-08-24 19:43:26 Post subject:

哈哈，　很多人都這樣氣問的。既然抓這一首，那就再來一個。仿七七一首（略作變動，純屬虛構），如下；《仿語障》他獨自誇飾。海與天聆聽色彩的心理躺椅陳述視線縫合血紅深藍如外星皮膚當更多的層次和光害靠來－－天啊，閃電妳拖著分叉的疲乏星雨下遲疑不去的溫差妳又如何淚蘸眼影拖著筆刷反覆織就兩尾辮子皮影浮游之間，路燈頷頸之間今晨行人，來來往往空氣透澈明亮。昨日昨日死，今日今日生；唱了就悔： "你在何處躲藏, 久別離的姑娘＂ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

成都锦瑟
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Joined: 13 Aug 2009
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Location: 成都
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Posted: 2009-08-24 20:53:15 Post subject:

教堂店前, 我讓你在外頭等等因為門口寫著”寵物不得入內” 今晨行人，來來往往空氣透澈明亮。昨日昨日死，今日今日生；唱了就悔： "你在何處躲藏, 久別離的姑娘＂这样的结尾非常有力道。很喜欢《仿語障》。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/cdjinse23

山城子
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Posted: 2009-08-24 21:20:41 Post subject:

宠物为宠物——可能幸福；人若为宠物——只能悲哀！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-08-24 21:33:40 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

哈哈，　很多人都這樣氣問的。
...

真吃惊！原来是你啊！！

非马
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Posted: 2009-08-25 05:25:38 Post subject:

喜欢博弈这首诗。互瞄之外，如再加上互吠，会更增声色。也喜欢“教堂店前”的双关语，虽然你也许不是有意。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

博弈
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Posted: 2009-08-25 06:11:00 Post subject:

哎呀呀～，與七小姐在這兒瞎詩胡鬧，讓先生給看到了。這不，都為了北美楓嚜？使用＂教堂店前＂是有意的，此其外，還擔心怕有人會覺得冒犯而不悅。不過，我這人不喜在這上面約束詩文，就由它了。＂互吠＂收到，的確更增＂聲色＂。謝謝指點。問好七七大度。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-08-25 11:09:41 Post subject: 没有没有

我很开心见识你的玲珑聪慧！跟你玩儿还是很好玩儿的啦！你的语障比我还严重啊，所以更开心了，嘎嘎！

戀海
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Posted: 2009-08-25 11:51:21 Post subject:

短而有味的詩喜歡問好題外話去年養了一隻馬爾濟斯犬能了解寵物被馴養的感受而博弈此作還有詩諷

一品红
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Posted: 2009-08-26 02:39:26 Post subject:

很有见地.欣赏. _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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