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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2009-07-29 07:29:42    Post subject: 酒后 Reply with quote
夜近黎明醉欲醒，登楼仍觉脚似空。
一烟燃尽头更大，万雨始临转无踪。
何事惹得群犬吠，无端销神众蝉鸣。
最爱晴时天方晓，忽听翠鸟四五声。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 06:48:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
一醉方休 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 11:13:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
浅醉如仙!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 21:38:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
一醉方休 Very Happy



一点伤心百番痛，醉到深处醉亦醒。
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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 21:48:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云闲人 wrote:
浅醉如仙!


醉里莫问浅与深，鬼相如仙不似人。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 14:30:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
酒后真言醉可掬。
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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 19:22:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
米运刚 wrote:
酒后真言醉可掬。



饮前酒过都是我，世相缥缈觑更深。
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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 21:51:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
孟东还 wrote:
夜近黎明醉欲醒，登楼仍觉脚似空。
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此诗对仗对得热火朝天，却还不挂“律诗”的招牌，无他，古风也！不论是我笑称的“拟律古风”，或古人名之的“拗体”，古风就是古风！在某些时候，为不以律自缚因辞害意，这阵风还会顽皮地吹来。不过在我一手遮天之下，这小讨厌也没几个好日子过了！
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PostPosted: 2009-08-18 16:57:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
醉里莫问浅与深，鬼相如仙不似人。
饮前酒过都是我，世相缥缈觑更深。
微醺半点兴方至，检点散句亦成文。
哪堪千杯浣胸臆，一纸天开诗如云。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-19 01:54:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
最爱刘伶噙杯诵，一点丹砂醉青云。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-21 22:14:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
米运刚 wrote:
最爱刘伶噙杯诵，一点丹砂醉青云。



刘伶噙杯犹能诵，特技表演满座惊。
吕岩空负姓双口，疑听腹语妒意浓。
譬若曾睹口技者，唇舌翻覆鼓镲鸣。
间中更闻歌相伴，猛嘴深喉巧化工。

Very Happy 临屏一笑，米兄勿怪！ Smile
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