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《入秋后第一片落叶》（五首）

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Posted: 2009-08-18 04:07:20 Post subject: 《入秋后第一片落叶》（五首）

《入秋后第一片落叶》夏天过去了各奔东西的日子依旧炎热偶尔想起你却不再充满爱意只在你到来之时忐忑，不安毕竟从你树上摘下来几乎所有青苹果并且摇落下入秋后第一片落叶 2009-8-11 《一个人坐在椅子上》只要稍稍抬头就可看见窗外的紫荆树紫荆树青翠的叶子，像温柔的羊蹄像两片肺一片是你的，一片是我的只要从椅子上站起来就可眺望到一座城市甚至两个人的未来云朵是白的，天是蓝的小鸟是飞翔的我却闭上眼睛聆听萨顶顶的《飞鸟与花》和《神香》让时光比我的心跳更慢让得到的可有可无让失去的不再重来是的这样的下午除了你，一切都不复存在 2009-8-11 《把花朵交给蝴蝶》一样的春一样不可忘的村庄一样满山遍野的橘子树橘子花开了到来的蝴蝶却不再是去年那只站在橘子树下的人也不再是你也不再是我 2009-8-12 《悲伤的夜晚》其实没什么好说的突然到来一场雨将一朵傍晚才盛开的蔷薇花打落下枝头接着雨停了把花盆搬回阳台找来一瓶长城干红却找不到喝红酒的杯子找来两个啤酒杯却找不到你和我一起喝酒，回想往事，又或者泣不成声 2009-8-12 《朝观音山归来》我登临绝顶并不为了一览大千世界苍茫得多么不可思议我只想匍匐在观音面前得到启示告诉我你身在何方这些年一直为你祈祷的日子是否过得吉祥如果真的要等到来生才能再见你一面那么，你会在哪一个路口与我相遇 2009-8-12 _________________ 酒醒只在花前坐，酒醉还来花下眠。半醉半醒日复日，花落花开年复年。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/xiaomi1967

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Posted: 2009-08-18 17:02:28 Post subject:

读着很舒服！问好！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2009-08-19 04:38:56 Post subject:

舒服就好。问好沙漠！ _________________ 酒醒只在花前坐，酒醉还来花下眠。半醉半醒日复日，花落花开年复年。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/xiaomi1967

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Posted: 2009-08-19 09:01:54 Post subject:

情诗容易让人入境~~真切~~问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-08-19 15:09:34 Post subject:

《朝观音山归来》我登临绝顶并不为了一览大千世界苍茫得多么不可思议我只想匍匐在观音面前得到启示告诉我你身在何方这些年一直为你祈祷的日子是否过得吉祥如果真的要等到来生才能再见你一面那么，你会在哪一个路口与我相遇平淡的叙述透着哲思，欣赏

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Posted: 2009-08-23 18:55:54 Post subject:

感谢白水版主的指导！ _________________ 酒醒只在花前坐，酒醉还来花下眠。半醉半醒日复日，花落花开年复年。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/xiaomi1967

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Posted: 2009-08-23 18:58:33 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

情诗容易让人入境~~真切~~问好~

感谢版主的支持与指导！
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酒醒只在花前坐，酒醉还来花下眠。半醉半醒日复日，花落花开年复年。
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Posted: 2009-08-24 20:47:06 Post subject:

真实自然的一组，语言凝炼。问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/cdjinse23

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Posted: 2009-08-24 21:31:26 Post subject: 我

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