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夜雨鹽埕
戀海
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Joined: 04 Aug 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-08-17 14:04:47    Post subject: 夜雨鹽埕 Reply with quote

戲院消失的光復、大舞台  
這地方讀起來有些頹廢十九世紀
我扯下幾塊月光窗帘
傾聽雨水訴說當年的繁華故事
許多眼睛等待著黎明
仍然一心譜出婉約宋詞
那時候鹽埕區手握紅燈綠酒

打一曲現代抒情的梆子
叫它寂寞聲音
寂寞是街燈下走過的衰老背影
留存許多尚未熄滅的回憶
請聽我說吶,我確定曾經愛過
那嫵媚風華
如今卻是
幾片烏雲掉落的詩片蒼茫
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-08-19 14:52:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

我扯下幾塊月光窗帘
傾聽雨水訴說當年的繁華故事

那嫵媚風華
如今卻是
幾片烏雲掉落的詩片蒼茫


令人感慨
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戀海
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PostPosted: 2009-08-20 12:34:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝白水的點評

問好
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