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《关于雪》

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Posted: 2009-08-16 18:43:21 Post subject: 《关于雪》

《关于雪》 1 关于雪是你一直喜欢的话题即使冬天很远很远时你也会自言自语—— 若是飘一场雪就好了 2 总也搞不明白你为什么总怀疑太阳的光辉当院子里那丛郁郁的花树焦枯于七月的这个午后我看见你眼里蓄满了泪水 3 若是飘一场雪就好了若是飘一场雪就好了。。。。。。你至少说了一万次终于——夏天无疾而终 4 雪上飘着雪是你最最喜爱的一个情景于是我提醒自己收集好今冬的这第一场雪在第二场雪来临之前铺满你空旷的院子 5 你说下雪时喜欢穿黑色的裙衣一个人院子里默默伫立让那份纯洁清晰地呈现一身直到风起 6 你总是雪停后就来看我门前窗下留下的全都是你的牵挂寻着你的脚印我努力走近你越走越近越走越远我迷路了

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Posted: 2009-08-27 01:50:17 Post subject:

飞雪流韵，提起来

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Posted: 2009-08-27 21:11:06 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

飞雪流韵，提起来

谢谢白水朋友的提读，谢谢你！

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