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月光下的遐想《—》
刘浩明
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 02:19:23    Post subject: 月光下的遐想《—》 Reply with quote

夜深人静了,一天工作之余的我,又在电脑边坐了几小时。该伸伸胳膊,伸伸腿了;明天还得上班,也该休息了。
不过,今晚我怎么一点儿睡意都没有?只是感到一个人在家的宁静和寂寞。我关了电脑,想到家的小庭院去透透气,散散步,顺便来几下自创的键身操。
想着,行动着,并推门而出!
啊! 看到的是: 庭院里已被银色的月光铺洒成一片;沉静的夜空上,挂着一轮姣洁而晶莹剔透的月儿,还有无数闪烁不定的繁星。
我凝视着,凝思着!夜空,是那样的沉静,那样的深远,是那样的迷人!令人无限的沉思, 遐想和深深的爱恋。我轻轻地而又急迫地抬起了脚,下了両级台阶走到庭院中;此时:我只怕因用重了脚步,而惊动了这样美丽,沉静的夜色;此刻:我却将自己的身体和思想都融入到这银色的月光之中了······。
我家的小庭院纵横不过7,8步,我情不自禁地往返几趟;惬意的散着步,吸着清新又带有凉意的空气,真爽!而我的走动也没惊走美景。我真来了几下自创的键身操;我在手舞足蹈,月光映着我的身影随之翩翩起舞,是我自创的键身操的动作像舞蹈动作?还是······?不想了,搬了一张小凳休息起来,并尽情地享受着这宁静的夜,沐浴着这银色的月光。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 14:05:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新文友!

此篇写得轻松自然。如以艺术作品的标准来要求,还可“新、深”一些。
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刘浩明
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 16:41:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

请周道模先生多指教,谢谢!
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