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七律<和酒鬼>
白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-07 05:00:27    Post subject: 七律<和酒鬼> Reply with quote

次韵和诗友

又 是 梨 白 柳 绿 时
甘 醇 佳 酿 鬼 先 知
故 园 醉 品 洋 文 味
异 域 昏 嚼 国 语 诗
桑 苑 虽 多 往 来 客
枫 城 却 少 旧 乡 思
临 窗 难 醒 江 南 梦
游 子 豪 歌 半 盏 痴

小窗原玉:

七律·和酒鬼

曲道深情酣饮时,
喉间小手味先知。
樽前犹解香留枕,
酒后方知冷落诗。
夜语舟人眠易笑,
昼书沽客梦难思。
风流酒鬼英雄也,
壶载疏狂壶载痴。


哈哈哈


酒鬼原玉:

深情总在抱壶时,
乱性闲吟乐自知。
顿足长呼空对酒,
捻髭短叹不成诗。
齐梁多少青衫客,
凤城一般未了思。
莫笑狂生糜艳意,
英雄自古梦常痴。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-03-07 16:04:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

韵味浓厚。我想为白水兄加精不知可否?
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他乡客
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 07:29:15    Post subject: Re: 七律<和酒鬼> Reply with quote

想不到人喝醉了都这么有诗意。很喜欢白水的和诗。也欣赏醉鬼的原玉,直追李太白的豪迈:
李白斗酒诗百篇,
长安市上酒家眠。
天子呼来不上船,
自称臣是酒中仙。

自记事起咱还没真正地喝醉过。不是吹牛,是真的不能喝。喝到6-7成就把握住自己不再喝了。所以找不到醉酒的感觉。无法和诗。等哪天兴起大醉一场再来和诗。正所谓:

壶里乾坤大,
杯中日月升。
醉至极乐地,
醒来两手空。

开个玩笑。请末介意。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 11:28:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢他乡客的和诗. 够爽.

这几位也是网友, 也是个个才气袭人. 我只是跟他们学写. Embarassed

抽空会贴一些大家唱和的诗来.
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凤舞九天
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 14:36:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知道诸君对七律是如何理解的?依我看这几首在格律上都有很多错误,离一首合格的七律还有距离。 Cool
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 14:49:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

凤舞九天 wrote:
不知道诸君对七律是如何理解的?依我看这几首在格律上都有很多错误,离一首合格的七律还有距离。 Cool

看来高手来了,请赐教. 更盼能读到你的诗歌. 问好 Very Happy
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 15:27:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

凤舞九天 wrote:
不知道诸君对七律是如何理解的?依我看这几首在格律上都有很多错误,离一首合格的七律还有距离。 Cool


期待
凤舞九天
的佳作
Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 18:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

酒鬼再和原玉:

送先生一首〈七律〉女酒鬼


苦酒残觞对月时,
疏狂豪纵任由知。
香魂谱就深情曲,,
玉魄书成乱性诗。
媚眼还空天下仕,
醉怀难忘女儿思。
飘摇瀚海逐旖梦,
留取余生半点痴。

清风弟子和诗原玉:

很久未来,奉命次韵一首:

《七律》读帖有感

每记纯真少女时,
春心一梦恐人知。
飞花落落床头枕,
举袖翩翩醉里诗。
今日推杯何所幸,
未来换盏再相思。
红颜酒鬼相谐趣,
任尔颠狂任我痴。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 18:52:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

小窗再和原玉:

随一首

蓬窗疏雨问天时,
金缕红膏莺燕知。
众友邀来颇费酒,
嫦娥唤下好吟诗。
递樽塞外云中雪,
载我江南画里思。
试语抱壶潸泪者,
飘摇莲步与谁痴?

就从这个酒鬼起句,草和山人一首

酒鬼独栖香稳时,清风弟子报声知。
添花补柳深深意,问燕寻莺脉脉诗。
罗带鸾翔堪妙醉,锦袍凤舞可萦思。
舒眉瞒过唇边语,惹得窥家满眼痴。

山人:清风弟子昵称
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一无
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PostPosted: 2013-11-07 09:13:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

“临 窗 难 醒 江 南 梦
游 子 豪 歌 半 盏 痴 ”
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