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圆号手说事
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 23:15:27    Post subject: 圆号手说事 Reply with quote

是在音乐的殿堂

比金色大厅还要大的音乐殿堂

是一个三管编制乐队

比三管制编制还要大的加强乐队

作曲家为了张扬旋律浑厚的灵魂

随手增加了圆号与巴松

这才有了我要说的事情



指挥的手势婀娜多姿

如风摆垂柳浮漂在我的眼前

指挥在舞蹈并且关闭了眼帘

因为音乐不需要视觉



我是个圆号手

我忙碌着为乐队制造声响

我在吹奏

5 5 5 5 i — —

结束在这坚强的高音 i 上后

精力顿时慌乱

溃不成军

这让我想起来了的是

没有吃早饭

聚光灯在乐队在音乐在

像一条暴风骤雨中大河

奔流不息

而我

在大河激流里挣扎

灵魂出窍了眼前黑暗了

肉体失去了掌控了

肌肉无比软弱

手指不能扳动按键

这时,能拯救我的是

随着圆号盒带进来的

快餐



取出餐盒垂下脑袋

由于饥饿便肆无忌惮

狼吞虎咽地吞噬

米饭鸡肉

米饭鸡肉

然后把骨头吐出来

细想起来

那定是一副哭笑不得的

让人讨厌的面孔



音乐在行进

我在思考蛋汤

我飞快取出调羹



冰凉了的鸡蛋紫菜汤

音乐进入激昂

节奏加快

飘过来指挥柳叶样手的舞动

与一根过长的

挂在舌头和嘴唇上的紫菜

明确地告诉我

该我吹奏了



当我吹出第一个音符的时候

那调皮的紫菜

便跟随着5 音一块

震荡了

紫菜成了发音的

乐器

圆号加紫菜

让指挥不好琢磨地

皱起了眉头

睁开了眼睛,瞧

这正是我的高音i ——

无限辉煌的时候



那顿快餐与

那乐音的紫菜味道

如青春期

偶尔的一次酒后驾车

无限勇敢地

调侃了一把自己的生命
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 02:25:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎您来落尘!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 07:39:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。!欣赏。。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 03:41:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢朋友们的欢迎和厚爱。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 14:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

有趣的作品,以诙谐对抗无奈。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 14:40:56    Post subject: 欢迎常来!圆号可是法国号?俺是吹小号的。 Reply with quote

张南城 wrote:
感谢朋友们的欢迎和厚爱。

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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 03:13:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

大概就是法國號。在吹號的先生面前,我有點是班門弄斧了。再次感謝您的閱讀。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 21:04:28    Post subject: 学生时候学的,军中又操练了两年。不过,也离开很久很久了。 Reply with quote

张南城 wrote:
大概就是法国号。在吹号的先生面前,我有点是班门弄斧了。再次感谢您的阅读。

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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 21:05:25    Post subject: 东拉西扯,您别太客气! Reply with quote

张南城 wrote:
大概就是法国号。在吹号的先生面前,我有点是班门弄斧了。再次感谢您的阅读。

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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 22:44:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

朋友客气了。说实在的我是不会吹号的,只是觉得“号”能给我一个较好表达的载体。
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