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80后作品 《彷徨》(外二首)投稿6期 问好
沈奕军
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PostPosted: 2009-08-02 05:40:13    Post subject: 80后作品 《彷徨》(外二首)投稿6期 问好 Reply with quote

彷徨(外二首) 近期复习 今晚涂鸦一个 问好
沈奕军

激情过后
冷静让夜晚
充填了时间的空白

一条江
怎么也不可能带走一座城市
江边的灯
总想诉说什么
是彷徨还是幽暗的色

我刚张开的嘴
被一尾鱼
扇了个冰冷的耳光

迷茫

迷失在黑夜
黎明离得太远
前方到底是什么
迷茫 还是再一次失落

该走就走吧
就让浪花
再一次激起潮



是感觉还是心灵的再一次撞击
那散落的血
多像我的骨髓炖出的汤
怎么也找不到我的影子

时间久了
痛只是呼吸外的
一次心跳

作者简介:沈奕军,男,汉族,陕西汉阴人,生于1985年,一直坚持诗歌散文创作,作品散见与《浙江作家》、《文学与人生》、《中国诗歌》、《群岛文学》、《新诗大观》、《大别山诗刊》、《安康日报》、《原野》、《涛声》、《诗友》、《诗文杂志》、《赣西文学》、《情诗季刊》、《平利文学》、《中诗月报》、《圣地诗刊》、《汉江晨刊》、《奔月》、《网诗如歌》、《新诗北》、《北大荒文学》《南方作家》等刊物,有作品被《5.12网络地震诗文全集》、《中国当代网络诗歌年选》(2008)《嘉陵江诗选》第三卷、《2008中国最佳网络诗歌》等收录,出版小说《彩虹下的初恋》。在2009年安徽一笑堂六安瓜片杯全国诗歌大赛和第二届“屈原杯”全国诗歌大赛获奖,现为一些刊物特约编辑。




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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 04:40:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确,炖成汤了真没影子了~~写得挺深~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 21:25:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
的确,炖成汤了真没影子了~~写得挺深~~

问好~
感谢 问好
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 16:23:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 17:24:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好老师 望多批评
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 22:21:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得挺深~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-09 03:30:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人清醒的一组
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