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往日有蕨（外）

天荒一隅
童生

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 18
Location: 黑龙江
天荒一隅Collection

Posted: 2009-07-31 20:18:47 Post subject: 往日有蕨（外）

往日有蕨趟过河，那边的风景在画布上摇摆不定剪刀在赞美一些绿深埋于针叶下的冷，搂着孢子。等待雨地下林，被聚集的时光矿化。琥珀光里，往日有蕨 2009-7-31 16:28:57 蕨，或刺嫩芽腐烂和将腐烂的叶子，潮湿摞列森林的厚度新生的蕨类，林下之林刺嫩芽，只是路过。阳光稀稀拉拉空气闪着暖光，我突然被静止。褐色，淡淡，直起腰 2009-7-31 16:01:48 _________________ 通联：154200 黑龙江省萝北县科技信息局孔祥忠

安红红
同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

安红红Collection

Posted: 2009-07-31 23:36:26 Post subject:

断句~尽量写到句断意不断~~诗歌跨越有些大~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

天风神威
秀才

Joined: 25 Mar 2009
Posts: 194

天风神威Collection

Posted: 2009-08-02 20:16:44 Post subject:

天荒兄弟的这两首诗歌，与以前的相比，不仅有似的灵性和跌宕，而且有质的飞跃。我非常欣赏第一首！

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