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◆第三者青春(组诗)
老祥
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Joined: 12 Jun 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-07-15 15:02:42    Post subject: ◆第三者青春(组诗) Reply with quote

◎二十岁不能说的再见

原谅我 不能再次读懂你
朦胧的支撑 幻化成蝶
在明媚 在斜阳里
枯涩的秋 延伸到嘴角 日益渐远
虚无与彷徨共存
我无法触及
蓊郁华年的脆弱感动


阳光还是洒下来
荡漾在生活深处做一个投影
孤独住进去
只有麻木了解我的心事
二十岁 阴霾被完全
躯体的物语 偷走我的蓝
往事背后 我不能大声 说出再见


◎时光隧道

不要远走 让我们依然停靠在低处
柔情斑驳喧嚣
旧时光点着璀璨 如花绽放
我们的隔阂是梦
幻觉写满珍藏
熠熠夺目里 那些伤 消逝一场凌迟

七月未央
柔软变成感情 冷漠的夜
容不下脆弱酸楚
再近些 我看见往事芬芳
意象在旋转
高昂的烂漫
姹紫嫣红

到遥远
露水含蓄的潮 打湿我
我的黎明从记忆开始
缠绵的冷 渗透我的孤独
岁月即去
黑隧道里
隐着暴露的神秘之白
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心灵的回音
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 51
Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 21:17:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌,文字质朴。拜读,问好!
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安红红
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Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 22:55:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

把多余重复的人称去掉些~可以更圆润~~
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骨笛
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Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

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PostPosted: 2009-07-18 03:50:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

七月未央
柔软变成感情 冷漠的夜
容不下脆弱酸楚
再近些 我看见往事芬芳
意象在旋转
高昂的烂漫
姹紫嫣红
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