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《锄地的父亲》（外四首）请阅

纪才
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Posted: 2009-06-27 20:10:05 Post subject: 《锄地的父亲》（外四首）请阅

《锄地的父亲》（外四首）东北纪才不听话的草疯长让父亲睡不好觉早晨四点就起来锄地他重复简单的动作用一生的忙碌为他的庄稼注释他深爱着每一棵小苗生怕走失一棵《工地》我无数次的经过看着那些忙碌的兄弟将沙子水泥汗水一起搅拌筑成别人舒适的爱巢穿过黑夜灯光你的身体挺直如林立的钢筋《塔吊》高高站立抬头挺直身子放眼远方伸展手臂360°自由旋转日夜忙碌从不喊累将一块砖一块砖垒起幸福的生活在拔节生长一举一动牵扯着我整个早晨属于你将心思搬上云端又轻轻放下《蜜蜂蜂农及其他》春暖花开你一路追赶火车季节把家安在沟底路边风餐露宿饱食辛苦早晨4点小镇还在酣睡闭紧的窗口梦在流淌月亮还没收起困倦的翅膀你开始像蜜蜂一样忙碌盘点一天的日子放飞甜蜜的梦当黄昏降临夜幕紧闭你把孤独寂寞打发给黑暗心中的生活蜜一样甜《凿碑者》雨一滴一滴滴落整个下午的忧郁凿碑者几下就刻完了六十年的脚步把别人刻在记忆里自己徘徊在日月的影子里一生的对与错将由谁来修改订正

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Posted: 2009-06-27 21:49:47 Post subject:

锄地的父亲很好的刻画出一个老农的形象

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Posted: 2009-06-27 22:37:09 Post subject:

简单而精炼的诗句！学习！

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Posted: 2009-06-27 23:35:48 Post subject:

最后一首不错~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

纪才
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Posted: 2009-06-29 03:29:58 Post subject:

问好缪立士、李有明、安红红三位诗友！

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Posted: 2009-07-10 21:45:28 Post subject:

再次问好各位诗友！

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Posted: 2009-07-15 00:52:51 Post subject:

再次问好李有明！

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Posted: 2009-07-15 01:40:27 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-07-16 20:36:09 Post subject:

问好韩少君！靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!! 真实的句子。

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Posted: 2009-07-21 22:36:12 Post subject:

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-07-21 23:23:42 Post subject:

问好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-07-29 16:54:24 Post subject:

问好杯中冲浪！

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