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老睡着多么可怕(六首)
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PostPosted: 2009-07-09 07:04:33    Post subject: 老睡着多么可怕(六首) Reply with quote

*一个没有忧伤的地方

那里,男人和女人背靠背
喝着各自的水
脚下流着各自的河流
那里,空旷无边
却不见绿草萋萋
那里,就是忧伤的尽头
你多想张开落日的翅膀飞过去
那里,坐在一块石头上
一只小鸟就停在你的鼻子鸣叫

*一个多么缓慢的春天

丑陋始终还未褪去
一个十九岁的小老大
两年后,再染血案,不再心跳
古老的街道,也已没了能力
去陈述什么迹象
只有唠叨的新闻像鱼饵
谁也不能回到母亲的子宫里
重生一次,只有伟大的虚空
隐在花丛,连绵不断飘着暗香

*一个无法反对的来由

在江边,你始终看不见鱼
在呼吸的转换间,无法哭无法笑
抬头看蓝天,白云也不想孤独
在山巅睡着和在房间内睡着
总找不出尖锐或柔软的差别
你在欲望里造就树的风景
没人记住你的惶恐与灰暗
在人世,你的一声声咳嗽
不惊天也不动地


*老睡着是多么可怕的事

我们总在穿衣的时候醒来
我们总在洗脸的时候醒来
喝牛奶啃面包拿钥匙打电话
我们总是那么轻易醒来
多谢窗外的光及时开放
多谢树上的鸟及时鸣叫
醒来,我们真的摸到了自己的心跳
醒来,我们的死亡总还是那个旧调
醒来,油菜花上的蝴蝶谁说光阴寂寥


*在悲痛里眺望都会更累

无缘无故又在寂寞的上午想起你
此刻,我西装革履的朋友,应该追上了
爱妻的脚步.我无法想像你晦暗或明亮的
光阴.我只知道自己的窗外,几个男女说着
他们的语言,我一点也听不懂春天的玩笑
不知多少年,没有登高远眺了,我自信的朋友
不知你另一个世界隐藏了什么荒野
我冷冷地坐在电脑前,一片松林的美景无法将我
打动,因为突然想起我们曾经的握手是那么的脆弱

*怎样的葡萄才能摆上祭台

如果哭喊都没人听见
那裂开胸膛是否也是多余
不再恐惧的人,何必再去阐释什么
转过山头把一棵树告别
留住风不一定留住翅膀
眼前的葡萄园在壮丽的天空下
任由你的灵魂游荡
怎样的男人与女人才能挂成一串
他们的目光宁静而深邃
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PostPosted: 2009-07-09 18:48:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

忧伤的尽头,原来是寂寞 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-13 06:27:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-07-13 11:48:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

看起句似是有情的種子,但不明為何強自分離,自有自怨自艾的可憐,何必自找煩惱,像是患上自閉症.整篇來說不夠明快,這般長分開六篇,但又不是散文詩的模樣,倒不如寫篇可愛的短文,或散文詩較好.內容不能引人入勝,相信沒人願意讀兩次以上,似是一篇夢囈說話..我不喜歡這樣凌亂,而在自言自語的寫法,這是我個人的感覺,如有冒犯,請多多包涵.
再見..祝君詩藝飛躍!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-13 13:45:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

眼前的葡萄园在壮丽的天空下
任由你的灵魂游荡
怎样的男人与女人才能挂成一串
他们的目光宁静而深邃
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PostPosted: 2009-07-15 04:36:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢批评!
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