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[原创] 《高原素描》(散文诗)
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 07:11:35    Post subject: [原创] 《高原素描》(散文诗) Reply with quote

高原素描



一座山峰的故居,一个村庄的缩影。高原之上,风吹开花朵,肥美的牧谣,梦里返回青郁的草地?
四野苍茫,夕阳西下。
思想被风化,踏沙而歌,每一次河流与岩石的碰撞,总击溅出水花,给高原增添浪漫。
山里人,脚印踩出道路。
梦想里的歌声,从高原出发,一路向西,把胸怀敞开,接纳阳光和风雨。



水洗的天空,有云朵的倒影。
高原的村庄,像一盏盏灯火,深入灵魂。
在暗夜,所有的仰望者,被经幡触动心底,升腾起光芒,照亮群峰。
谁是群峰边缘的琴手?弹奏骨质音乐,穿越历史和大地,而无际的草,遍地生长,满目葱郁。
野性的刀锋,席卷了高原。
翅膀上的景致,在风中嘶鸣。一曲羽化的歌,在峡谷里飞翔,经风历雨的沧桑,澎湃雄性的血潮......



雨后的村庄,欢心荡漾。
柔情似水,在群山奔涌。年年如此的青绿,是湛蓝的天空,飞翔着孤傲的苍鹰。
伫立高原的老树,和风一起,从黎明到黄昏,让松涛成为崖畔的风景。
让群峰之下的牧场,四野寥廓,黄昏暮垂。
谁的脚下?比天空素洁的花朵,抵达意识层面,进行纯正的抒情。
深入高原的情歌,一曲一天堂。
布满圣土的民谣,一律一世界。



广袤的心境,马匹奔跃,劲风疾弛。
沉默者断言:天空的心脏根植于高原。
一阵风,回旋山头,栖身坡脚。村庄的草,被吹得往畜圈方向私奔。
妹妹打开柴门,枯枝升起温暖的氛围,捂热雪山,涓流成河。
凛冽的光芒落地。
谁扬起牧鞭,穿越草原的胸怀。坐拥月夜,青春的影子逆水而行,抵达淙淙情歌的源头......
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 17:00:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错!应该提精华!
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 15:50:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言、句式、境界、技巧、思想..........成熟,难得!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 09:22:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

秦华 wrote:
不错!应该提精华!


谢秦华!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-09 09:23:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

孙伊斌 wrote:
语言、句式、境界、技巧、思想..........成熟,难得!


请多指导。
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