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《离开》等几首

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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2009-06-28 03:13:21 Post subject:

让肮脏远离就象生命不扎根于泥土挂在空中 ....状态不错的一组，精华.

钓月
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Joined: 12 Apr 2008
Posts: 409
Location: 中国江苏
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Posted: 2009-06-28 03:52:14 Post subject:

问好红红！诗感不错嘛 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

李有明
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Joined: 15 Jan 2008
Posts: 310

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Posted: 2009-06-28 11:17:47 Post subject:

很干净很纯粹，学习！

蓝花伞
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Joined: 17 Mar 2008
Posts: 40

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Posted: 2009-07-05 20:41:20 Post subject:

描摹得生动意蕴,学习!

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
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Posted: 2009-07-06 02:46:05 Post subject:

让肮脏远离就象生命不扎根于泥土挂在空中 ....不错的一组 _________________ 陕西姜华

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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Posted: 2009-07-06 18:18:37 Post subject:

同意各位。细腻而不流于琐碎，流畅，干净。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

山桃花
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Joined: 16 May 2009
Posts: 81

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Posted: 2009-07-06 18:55:38 Post subject:

有好多佳句！再来学习

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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Location: 中国陕西省
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Posted: 2009-07-06 18:57:05 Post subject:

很干净很纯粹，学习！ _________________ 陕西姜华

fuller679
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Joined: 09 Apr 2009
Posts: 7

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Posted: 2009-07-27 16:55:29 Post subject:

安红红：你好孤独好解决孤独时不要闷在小室里，劝您要迈出小室去走访大自然. 那青山绿水那万紫千红的百花那蓝天白云那马牛羊的合声乐曲那风力发电的风叶旋转。大自然的一切多彩和睦相处人融合在大自然中就会根治孤独病！朋友，你有强健的生命力量求医不如求己！你信吗？去大自然中试航一下吧！ fuller679 _________________ fullerliu

安红红
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Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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Posted: 2009-07-30 01:18:02 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们阅读~~多指出不足之处~~ 问好楼上的诗友们~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

黄淮
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Joined: 08 Feb 2009
Posts: 135

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Posted: 2009-08-02 00:36:02 Post subject:

这样好的自由诗，难得一见——我收藏——细细品读。 _________________ 以诗开慧，以爱塑魂；以侓立体，以意传神；律随情移，体缘律立；以律为纲，振兴新诗。

张南城
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Joined: 02 Aug 2009
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Location: 中国安庆
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Posted: 2009-08-03 00:36:43 Post subject:

字有灵气的，谁都别想糟践了他，而且，还有你的佑护…… _________________ 感谢我的太阳每天如约升起……

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2009-08-03 04:02:29 Post subject:

伸头喝了口水咽下最后的痕迹安静的站在荷叶上它的目光处子样纯洁

天荒一隅
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 18
Location: 黑龙江
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Posted: 2009-08-03 11:30:23 Post subject:

欣赏红红的佳作。问好！ _________________ 通联：154200 黑龙江省萝北县科技信息局孔祥忠

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2009-08-03 13:49:40 Post subject:

没有阅读障碍，干净，深入。确实不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

陈瀚乙
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Joined: 15 Nov 2009
Posts: 9

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Posted: 2009-11-16 03:37:22 Post subject:

光溜溜的孤独 -----这句也好

梦之
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Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Posts: 66
Location: 北美
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Posted: 2009-11-16 05:23:57 Post subject:

好诗! 欣赏！ _________________ 梦醒时分

岸柳
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Joined: 08 Aug 2009
Posts: 48

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Posted: 2010-01-20 21:31:36 Post subject:

学习了！情到深处人孤独！

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