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 Posted: 2009-06-05 17:35:46 Post subject: 原创《一塲激烈童戏》 |
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原创《一塲激烈童戏》 写於2005年4月
看电视中的野战,
1952新年的童戏,
清楚地涌现眼前,
小朋友三五成群,
拿着小玩具鎗,
东奔西跑打起巷战,
爬高爬低追捉着,
小玩具鎗烧铂铂纸有火焩焩声。
玩来虽然简单,
但感觉激烈非常,
不差下於现代野战场,
一定依著游戏规矩,
一个一个的死去,
打到死光為止。
唉!人生就是一样呵,
道具和游戏简单,
但要有规有矩,
那一样高兴,
虽然没有先进工具,
玩来一样的成功!
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2009-06-06 18:28:24 Post subject: |
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虽然没有先进工具,
玩来一样的成功!
人生就是一场游戏？ |
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| Posted: 2009-06-21 18:03:32 Post subject: |
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發覺少年人寫詩比成年人有多些想像力,
因為他們心中有無限的幻想---這就是詩的要求.
成人天馬行空的胡思亂想,寫出來的東西也是枉然.
一定不太自然...這可算是失敗的多,不夠成功!
但我這篇詩是我童年真實記憶...不算是天馬行空的詩章!
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| Posted: 2009-06-21 21:55:08 Post subject: |
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| 半溪明月 wrote: |
虽然没有先进工具,
玩来一样的成功!
人生就是一场游戏？ |
半月 君,妳說的完全沒錯呵,
人生就似是一場游戲;
或也許是一場賭博吧!
這裡邊的詩歌不錯.
現代詩也許快有個規格,
目前人人似在散文詩摸索;
其實台灣正在這方面實現!
謝,謝!
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| Posted: 2009-06-23 03:29:54 Post subject: |
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富有童趣，喜欢。问好。
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