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农民工三首
山桃花
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Joined: 16 May 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-06-05 02:41:03    Post subject: 农民工三首 Reply with quote

●雨中印象
平安街,行人少了许多
我走过一群人
皱巴巴的衣服,粗糙的脸,黝黑
一色的胶鞋,这是来自异乡的民工
其中一个,张着白色塑料袋
里面挤着几只土豆,几根葱,给另一个人看
其余的,每人手里都有一只火烧
兴许是刚出炉的吧
有的刚咬开一二口
有的还剩小半拉,像小半拉焦黄的月亮
他们满足地笑,有滋有味地嚼
我想起在好多地方,看到过这样的情景
我想到他们的妻子,千叮咛万嘱咐
结实的粗布被褥,适合于水泥石子浇灌的骨头
此时,他们的妻子是幸福的
耕种土地,赡养亲人
她们没有看见,她们的丈夫
站在雨中,站在异乡的平安街上
手里捏着小半拉火烧

●苦旅
他们站在超市门口
在一堆贱卖品跟前,被一只兰花指
廉价出售
他们不会下蛋,不会产奶
他们摆不上货架,轻得无法称重
他们没有标识,因此不属于信得过产品
不适用于售后服务
他们的身体因僵化而脱臼
露出一寸寸骨,自行焊接,且不打石膏
他们栖身于盲区,在夜晚,对着硕大的月亮
笨拙的唇,不知说什么好
他们将自己卷一纸劣质烟,大口地抽
抽出骨髓,铺一条回家的路,而年后至年前
这段日子,他们得尽量在夜里平躺下来
伸展四肢,让每一块砖瓦
充血,膨胀,发情,垫高石头的欲望和尖叫
并熄灭十五光灯泡,随手带上城市的门
然后,悄悄枯萎,轻轻落叶
归根

●麦梢黄时
五月,一批批民工返乡
收割麦子
北方的黄土地,颗粒未种
她站在五月的缺口,眺望冀中,豫中,再远一点
麦垛如云,她的叹息如云
粗犷的男人们带回自家的麦香
酿酒,碰杯,豪饮,疯说
在这个小小的城镇里,被麦芒刺伤,大声呜咽
他们摔碗,割破血管,流出浓浓的方言,灌醉城市
一棵麦穗紧贴衣兜,他们舍不得铡
她猜,那是他们鲜嫩水灵的妹妹啊
还热乎乎地冒着阳光呢……
她不能安慰些什么,麦稍黄时,她的心也惶惶
她和高高的脚手架
一直被晾晒在
五月的麦田之外
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晴宝儿
秀才


Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Posts: 666

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PostPosted: 2009-06-05 03:13:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景真实,生活艰辛,令人有所触动!
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骨笛
秀才


Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

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PostPosted: 2009-06-09 23:41:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动,真切。怜悯尽现。
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我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 16:39:59    Post subject: 不错 Reply with quote

不错。作者很熟悉特殊群体的生活和情感。
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 16:41:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的着墨点,提
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 06:31:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人的悲悯~
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