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PostPosted: 2009-05-16 06:31:26    Post subject: 三个 Reply with quote

<一只鸟>
一只鸟停在屋后的石畔
三日,它不飞也不啄食,翅膀
长满青苔
树影在它周围站成了乏味的木偶
我用可口可乐一滴滴喂它
它的翅膀抖一下,目光越过
矮墙头
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有个禁锢在窗内的小孩
向它射出一发玩具枪弹
它把头埋入草丛约三分钟
样子有点无聊
嗖地
一瓣羽毛从它嘴里飞出
像片霞
很快消失在空中
<竹间>
 裙子的背景,是一根摇曳的竹影
鸟的翅膀,刚要拍下这帧照片
一根老竹,啪啪的裂音
把它惊落进
渗满露珠的晨光中
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藏入竹林的人,悬起了雾帘
从一片竹叶的背面,他透望

这个世界
但他无法辨清每一处
已泛起朦胧青色的地方
<一叠相框>
她的圆形的脸
叠着
我的方形的脸
三角形的屋角
老看我们不顺眼
我的两只臂
真想合为枷
把相框里最俏的脸
枷住
而她
早已逃出黑色背景的呻吟
向三个方向
逃亡去
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PostPosted: 2009-05-16 14:19:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

很耐品的几首, 很好的留白想象空间。

不好意思,帮你把排版也稍拉开了点空间,你若不喜欢请告知,我可帮你还原回去 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-05-16 14:34:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

当然可以,我是随意到极的人,自由和快乐是非常重要,因为中医和易经钻过些时间,严重的诗缺陷是诗柜子老要藏几重东西,这样反而没显东西,但人是为自己活的!只想玩和松,微欲都没有,蚂蚁一只或者大象一头
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PostPosted: 2009-05-16 14:39:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢谅解。
同感,诗歌只是陶冶情操的文学爱好,愉快就好。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-16 15:07:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

壶子都倒悬嘛
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