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五绝楚霸王

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Posted: 2009-05-09 03:28:48 Post subject: 五绝楚霸王

五绝楚霸王身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。几度轻饶敌，別姬自败亡。

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Posted: 2009-05-10 01:06:19 Post subject:

几度轻饶敌，很有意思的诗句

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

几度轻饶敌，很有意思的诗句 Very Happy

鸿门宴，彭城大会战，鸿沟楚汉讲和。。。霸王几次有致刘邦于死地的机会，可他或者过于心高自负，或者兼有悲悯之心，轻易饶过刘邦，终致霸王垓下别姬乌江自刎，留下千古遗憾。所以毛对此深有体会和感触，写下诗句：宜将剩勇追穷寇，不可沽名学霸王。

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Posted: 2009-05-13 06:30:39 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

几度轻饶敌，很有意思的诗句 Very Happy

敌：古韵仄声，新韵平声。
如用新韵，修改如下：

身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。
几度饶敌去，別姬自刎亡。

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Posted: 2009-05-15 01:10:19 Post subject:

谢秋叶兄。有时这二三声，新旧韵，有点绕人。。。身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。几度轻饶敌，別姬自败亡。

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Posted: 2009-05-15 05:28:20 Post subject:

请教庆宏君:为什么毛诗对楚霸王要使用"沽名"二字,含义若何? 先谢过! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-05-15 05:50:32 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

谢秋叶兄。有时这二三声，新旧韵，有点绕人。。。
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谢秋叶兄。有时这二三声，新旧韵，有点绕人。。。

身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。
几度轻饶敌，別姬自败亡。

“饶”字是平声，我搞错了。这一改更好。

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Posted: 2009-05-15 23:45:29 Post subject:

身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。几度轻饶敌，別姬自败亡。 ========================================= 枉称楚霸王，乱用慈悲肠。关键纵强敌，非天自灭亡。[项羽失败非天意,实乃自取灭亡也]

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Posted: 2009-05-16 01:41:20 Post subject:

穆平 wrote:

身为楚霸王，兼有悯悲肠。
几度轻饶敌，別姬自败亡。
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枉称楚霸王，乱用慈悲肠。
关键纵强敌，非天自灭亡。[项羽失败非天意,实乃自取灭亡也]

谢穆平诗友和诗！

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