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请把我的手放到那片灾难的废墟

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-05-20 19:41:12 Post subject: 请把我的手放到那片灾难的废墟

请把我的手放到那片灾难的废墟请把我的手放到中国西南，放到那片灾难的废墟我要触摸那瓦砾之下和瓦砾之上的泛紫的甚至灰黑的嘴唇我要从死亡的沉寂里触摸刚刚还鲜活的声音请把我的手放到多水和多山地方，放到长江黄河初经的路口我要摸那萧萧竹林和穿行其间的熊猫以及熊猫的文字嗬嗬！我抚摸到了苍苍古朴的川江的号子请把我的手放到青铜器放到人类纸币最早印制的天府之国请放到八级地震放到灾难之巅放到废墟我要摸死而不合的耳道和死而不冥的牙齿我要摸那凸凸凹凹的盆地语系嗬嗬！我摸到了不是喷火的川剧不是狡黠的变脸，我摸到了比吴语还要伊侬比鲁语还要耿直比陕语还要拙朴的四川话把我颤抖的手放在已经沉寂了的废墟下放到中国汶川放到因地陷天更加高远的空中我要摸亡者不死的声音摸他们麻辣得让我动容的俏皮请把我的手放到废墟我要摸亡者的喘息的波纹…… 2008-5-21 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2008-05-20 20:18:07 Post subject:

无言

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-05-21 04:29:41 Post subject:

心沉重到已经无法阅读这样的文字..............唯有泪落下...........

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-05-21 04:44:30 Post subject:

灾难不能不纪念。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

山城子
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Posted: 2008-05-21 06:17:25 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

心沉重到已经无法阅读这样的文字..............唯有泪落下...........

——借用福治的帖子吧！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-05-22 00:13:31 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们的回帖。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-05-22 01:08:30 Post subject:

请把我的手放到废墟我要摸亡者的喘息的波纹……

戴永良
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Posted: 2008-05-22 05:46:46 Post subject:

请把我的手放到中国西南，放到那片灾难的废墟我要触摸那瓦砾之下和瓦砾之上的泛紫的甚至灰黑的嘴唇 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

陈若祥
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Posted: 2008-06-10 22:14:08 Post subject:

长的诗句抒发着炽热的情感，诗歌信息量大，视野开阔，有张力。欣赏了！ _________________ ¤当树的叶子再次泛绿，繁华 ¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影 ¤看着春天悄悄地走来 ¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下 ◆安徽凤鸣诗社◆http://blog.sina.com.cn/fmshishe

戴玨
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Posted: 2008-06-11 01:24:51 Post subject:

寫的是動作，作者復雜的心情沒有直說，但讀者卻能感受到，好。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-06-11 15:32:54 Post subject:

在构思上借鉴了戴望舒的“我用残损的手掌……” 新、细、深，有个性和特色。是无数“主题大、内容真、感情深、但表现雷同、艺术平庸、读了就忘”的地震诗歌中的优秀作品！祝贺！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

nobody
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Posted: 2008-06-13 18:13:42 Post subject:

谢道模的提醒，终于想起来了，我用残损的手掌。太久了。这个比冲浪自选的两个都好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-06-13 18:18:19 Post subject:

悲痛萦绕　深感沉重！ _________________ 晴宝儿

kino
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Posted: 2008-06-14 06:38:00 Post subject:

不忍卒读！真希望有这么一双手，可以立刻抚平一切创伤，而不是只是触摸，触摸所带来的安慰是有限的。

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-06-14 15:00:49 Post subject:

灾难是无法言表的痛楚,让我们一起把诗人的手放到那片废墟上................

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-05-03 00:35:09 Post subject:

摸亡者的喘息的波纹……

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-05-03 15:57:28 Post subject:

装修房子，好久没上网了，问候大家。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-05-04 21:26:11 Post subject:

一只手凝聚着冰冷的血痕，惊人的沉重。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

南闽老茂
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Posted: 2009-05-08 14:56:29 Post subject:

触动着深深的疼痛！ _________________ [新浪博客]http://blog.sina.com.cn/nmlm

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