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断章取意挪用歪曲
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PostPosted: 2009-04-24 04:20:09    Post subject: 断章取意挪用歪曲 Reply with quote
和友们玩，剖杀张先之 <山亭宴>。 也就是取一句词，断章取意的挪用歪曲一下。

望遥山、迷离红树

远山如黛
树影在迷惘间，起伏
泛着夕阳模糊的韵

一缕缕渴望蜿蜒而去
浩渺的碧波云天
看鸟飞过，寒烟般迷离

04/21/2009

小艇载人来

垂暮帷幔下
晚风等待赴约
我独饮，一湖依稀的不安

渐渐有小舟来
这个清香的时刻
我不想掩饰翻在落日里的微笑

04/22/2009

水际见鷖凫

一色水天
黄昏、芦苇、游鱼，都穿着离愁
在纵横交错的眼波里，迷失

今夜我们就做那一对倦鸟
清漫夜色朦胧
挽留了季节，错觉了时空

04/23/2009 谢Eragon修改

翦烟花、幽兰啼露

穿过松柏的青色谁的炊烟
轻轻飘落
花开花谢般无声

缭绕清兰的幽香风的记忆
晶莹如露
揽回旧时情绪

04/21/2009

镜面绿波平

湖水如一面会心的镜子
蒙绿波，似平静
映照无眠的伤怀

临水，等待无边
痴心沦陷杯酒
一壶挣扎的醉，如波荡漾

04/22/2009

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山亭宴 -- 张先

（湖亭宴别）
碧波落日寒烟聚，望遥山、迷离红树。小艇载人来，约尊酒、商量歧路。衰柳断桥西，共携手、攀条无语. 水际见鷖凫，一对对、眠沙溆。

西陵松柏青如故。翦烟花、幽兰啼露。油壁间花骢，那禁得、风吹细雨。饶他此后更思量，总莫似当筵情绪。镜面绿波平，照几度、人来去。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-25 07:12:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢喏～
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PostPosted: 2009-04-26 04:08:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
小艇载人来

最喜欢这一句。问好
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 07:49:28    Post subject: 咋喜欢啦，具体些吗~ Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 07:50:19    Post subject: 你喜欢这句，我一点都不奇怪~ 问好 Reply with quote
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小艇载人来

最喜欢这一句。问好
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 09:17:23    Post subject: 具体的来说，悠子的作品我都喜欢。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 13:58:11    Post subject: 是吗，悠子以前怎么不知道？ 这下要乐晕了 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-28 14:17:35    Post subject: 我不想掩饰翻在落日里的微笑 ZT Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-28 15:38:25    Post subject: 不许乱Z Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 02:19:19    Post subject: 明明就没。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 07:15:30    Post subject: 说说你没乱在哪里了？ 抗拒要从严 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-30 21:16:33    Post subject: 抗拒会被解读成错乱。 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
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