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意淫的碎片并案例
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 05:01:24    Post subject: 意淫的碎片并案例 Reply with quote

意淫的碎片


那些洁白的东西
宣纸毛巾脱脂的棉花
你想尽快弄脏它

然后把情绪弄得
披一片儿
挂一片儿的

你没必要
和梅花和水杯和火山
过不去

门轴响了
你若无其事地

泼墨
写意



案例一


门已叉上
似乎有人路过

你在屋里问
外面是谁?

外面回答
没谁



案例二


旺媳妇从来不坐席

旺不在家
很多人都惦记着她

可也是
谁让她长得那么招人呐

坐席的时候总会有人喝高
舞马长枪
把小屯搅得晃晃荡荡

村长也总在这时候站到大门外:
“旺媳妇,没坐席去?”

屋里传出怯怯的回应
没 没去 ----

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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 05:12:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

门已叉上
似乎有人路过

你在屋里问
外面是谁?

外面回答
没谁


好~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 06:40:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

碎片恣意~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 07:28:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

旺媳坐席确实是件意淫的事。这首好。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 21:56:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

意淫的案例
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 23:25:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

深刻的写意。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-08 02:50:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

回谢各位blue moon
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PostPosted: 2009-04-09 16:46:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

没被打劫,不算去过广东。
不会* *, 不算诗人。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-09 17:32:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

案例二真好玩!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-10 02:02:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="nobody"]没被打劫,不算去过广东。
不会* *, 不算诗人。

哈哈。广州 深圳 湛江 清远 韶关 丹霞山 南华寺 没少深入啊 只是没有被打劫 早茶 晚茶还不错 不洗头 不洗脚 也不松骨
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PostPosted: 2009-04-19 12:47:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

不洗头 不洗脚 。。。
这么不卫生啊,哈哈 Very Happy

范冰冰,李冰冰
档期再满
也得准时赴您这译音之约。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-04-23 12:37:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

super man
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PostPosted: 2009-04-23 16:22:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较有新意.
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PostPosted: 2009-04-24 04:12:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑~~

少君的风格有所转变还是心有所想??
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