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二月 水居
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PostPosted: 2009-04-20 17:15:21    Post subject: 二月 水居 Reply with quote

二月 水居


无形之水 凌波而栖

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第一天 就老了青春

打磨整齐的时间齐刷刷地翻墙而过



不能忍受第二天的来临

阵痛 宫缩 怀抱青草露珠睡去



桃红柳绿 水样的容颜也会蜕变

打皱的表情陪衬无端的理由



凡此种种 过往种种 均默守空洞的疼痛

是的 没有安然的流浪 没有淡然的眼睛



劳顿旅途,在第三天准时找到以琳 上帝的旨意

十二个泉眼 七十棵棕树 至此 安营扎寨
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PostPosted: 2009-04-21 10:02:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

以琳
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以琳 (希伯来语: אֵילִם,英语:Elim)是以色列人在出埃及时经过的一个地点,记载在《出埃及记》15、16两章和民数记33章。

根据出埃及记和民数记,以琳位于靠近红海东岸的地方,在汛的旷野以西.出埃及记和民数记都记载在以琳“有十二股水泉,七十棵棕树”,以色列人就“在那里的水边安营”。


一些慈善机构、基督徒机构都以以琳命名。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-21 16:19:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

无形之水~凌波而栖~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-21 23:01:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有来历,读来有十日谈开篇的味道
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PostPosted: 2009-04-22 03:38:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

上帝的旨意

十二个泉眼 七十棵棕树 至此 安营扎寨
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PostPosted: 2009-04-22 12:53:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

神谕。
我们必得福音!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-24 03:29:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢朋友们来点评!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-27 23:21:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

来读阿依的诗,提起来
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PostPosted: 2009-04-28 03:47:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

似是一段行程,多苦的自我。也许......说不上来..
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 16:12:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常欣赏,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-30 13:30:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

凡此种种 过往种种 均默守空洞的疼痛

是的 没有安然的流浪 没有淡然的眼睛
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