米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2009-03-22 01:22:12 Post subject: 卧草原 |
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卧草原
日落芳草腾碧丹，翠染狼居第九山。去病扬风马得得，香妃诵露瑟田田。
畅随金星辉北厥，慵于鸟尾下南关。应是涤胸绿无际，呵气雁惊大漠烟。 |
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米运刚
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 00:16:48 Post subject: |
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| 草原，带给了我太多的遐想，给了我太宽阔的胸襟，感谢草原！ |
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勿妄言
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Joined: 17 Apr 2007
Posts: 236
Location: 四川 德阳
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 00:23:12 Post subject: |
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"应是涤胸绿无际，呵气雁惊大漠烟。"精彩！
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象； |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 00:29:37 Post subject: |
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| 揖谢勿妄言兄了！拙作粗糙，还望兄指点。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 04:21:52 Post subject: |
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通过对草原历史人物的描绘,更衬托出草原的广博,从而充分展示了作者-运刚的神绪与胸襟!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 15:54:21 Post subject: |
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畅卧草原,欣然怀古.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 16:03:58 Post subject: |
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| 大漠胸襟，历史画卷。香妃琴瑟，去病长剑。 |
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米运刚
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-04-21 23:16:24 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白云、黄、庆宏诸兄，并问诸兄暮春好！ |
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