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云,金子的雨
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 17:09:49    Post subject: 云,金子的雨 Reply with quote

人们接受金子的雨像达厄娜
无论锁闭得多么严实
宙斯一样穿越她无染的子宫
就在灵魂孕育生命的芳香里
开始因为沉重的金子下坠
一刻不停失去展翅高翔的轻盈

云,我要说,你是轻盈的
就在你飘拂而过的山巅翠绿松枝上
那只鸟儿跟你一样轻盈
就像有了云一样的心
敢于凭小小殷红的脚爪握紧松枝
在狂风中荡悠,多么美妙呀

云,那鸟儿忘记了唳叫和惊啼
仿佛孩子总在唱无忧的歌
那不是停留在城市窗台
或栖息金丝织就的笼中鸟能唱的
许多鸟迷失在金子的雨中
心脏由于太多金雨的灌注
无法负荷小小娇柔的身躯
羽毛凋落如深秋的枯叶
衰老在没人光顾的角隅
呻吟着悲哀地闭上黯淡的双眸

云,你却是悠然的
可当你飞过城市上空
穿越乌烟瘴气的小巷
你却欲哭无泪地滞缓
很多时候,你穿行
高楼大夏的缝隙
曾迷失了你自己的天空
也许你曾徘徊,迷惘
忘记了风的簇拥
你惘然被浓烟污染呛住了
那个时候,我为你哭着如注的泪水
却洗刷不干净你梦一样莹洁的姿影
那时我就听见你唱悲伤的歌

云,金子的雨从没有
让小草花朵得到滋润
云,金子的雨是带锈和酸碱的污水
总是玷污,总是腐蚀,总是烧灼
我就知道你从没有
离开过松下童子的话音
我就知道我一直寻访的
不是禅师而是你呀云

云深不知处
我愿意永远伴随你的升浮
在密林深处听松的交响
听云的歌韵,听泉的涓滴
听鸟的婉转,听林中
女仙霓裳的窸窣
与你共舞,忘记来时的路
流连在你起舞的花丛
不知今夕何夕
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 18:56:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

情节自有特点.问好
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 22:00:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
情节自有特点.问好



问好金金!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-15 22:20:26    Post subject: 好诗, Reply with quote

好诗,文字优美,生动。
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