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五绝－钓鱼

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-04 07:26:22 Post subject: 五绝－钓鱼

五绝－钓鱼昔日生庞氏，今多麦道夫。金钩穿大饵，贪字钓为输。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-04-04 18:09:13 Post subject:

今多马道夫，贪婪终归输。

冰清
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Posted: 2009-04-05 10:55:03 Post subject:

金钩穿大饵，贪字钓为输。警策之句！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-04-06 05:42:42 Post subject:

秋叶,喻策言诗! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 13:18:13 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

今多马道夫，贪婪终归输。

谢谢庆宏兄赏读，“贪婪终归输” 双方都是如此啊。

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 13:19:34 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

金钩穿大饵，贪字钓为输。

警策之句！

谢谢冰清老师点评，近好！

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 13:22:48 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

秋叶,喻策言诗!

白云兄过誉，一时有感而发而已，谢谢。

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-07 15:34:15 Post subject:

大钓小钓都为钓, 人不钓鱼鱼钓人经济危机把大家的投资都套牢了

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Posted: 2009-04-22 16:16:18 Post subject:

好诗！世上贪婪之人真该去看看钓叟钓鱼。我替这些永不醒悟的人谢谢秋叶君。

王君明
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Posted: 2009-04-23 18:31:13 Post subject:

拜赏，我是钓鱼人，有时也会被鱼钓哈 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-30 20:09:14 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

大钓小钓都为钓, 人不钓鱼鱼钓人
经济危机把大家的投资都套牢了 Very Happy

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-30 20:13:30 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

好诗！世上贪婪之人真该去看看钓叟钓鱼。我替这些永不醒悟的人谢谢秋叶君。

谢谢米兄赏读，愿大家小心投资，金融风暴早日过去。

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-30 20:16:20 Post subject:

王君明 wrote:

拜赏，我是钓鱼人，有时也会被鱼钓哈 Very Happy

谢谢王兄，看来钓鱼对投资是很有启发啊。

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