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风来疏竹
童生


Joined: 30 Mar 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 08:46:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
风来疏竹 wrote:
远方的月亮

今年的三月有些忙乱
没能抽出空闲去约会春天
闻闻花香,看看柳绿
或者到你的耦园
采撷一片真情的天蓝

但我知道啊,我知道
春天将我包围着
春光在我的心底蔓延无限
我看到,那长长的海底电缆
也在春波里缠绵

谁说只有在你的梦里
残苞吐蕊
谁说只有在你的梦里
翠竹滴响

多少个不眠的夜啊
你啊,我远方的月亮
在我后院的小径上
伴我轻吟低唱

多少个分分秒秒啊
你啊,我远方的月亮
我坐于前庭的青石板上
满怀揽入你温馨的光

...


竹子,喜欢你的诗歌,真情, 自然, 感人.谢谢.羡慕你们东北军,好像天生会写诗歌似的, 诗坛有不少东北人:丢丢集团军,少君,海军,娇娇, 阿末,宝儿,,,,,,好多呢. Very Happy


水水,只要你喜欢就好。呵呵,这么多高水平的人,让偶愈加不敢提笔了。
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娇娇
秀才


Joined: 18 Nov 2008
Posts: 124
Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 15:53:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯洁真挚的友情!羡慕!祝福二位!
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每段路都有蹊径,向着阳光延伸!
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:41:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

刘浪 wrote:
我也看看这柔情似水 Laughing


谢谢流浪 Very Happy
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白水
大学士


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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:47:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
七绝 山城子老师发廊历险记
七绝 山城子老师发廊历险记

误入发廊门户中,桃花上脸映霞红。
面朝老伴实难辩,我本无心遭媚功。

山城子原玉:


在申城说笑话(上海行组诗之十八)
美 容

老伴滞后细看桃花 我回头看她
不留神掉进一个临街的美容门面
十多个女孩美容师一式几近三点
不由分说架到楼上说只有三张呀
那就一张拔光胡子
那两张咯咯… 就一边一个印吧
呵呵,出来时正迎住老伴
她说:那桃花咋开到你腮上来了
...


好诗好和 Very Happy Very Happy



和白水七绝:
又入热帖群跟中,桃花敷脸避羞红。
笑话出口口难辩,白水三月腾笔功。

...


谢谢老师的和诗.
这样的笑话诗歌写得好,幽默,讽刺,醒脑,又不咄咄逼人. 学习了 Very Happy
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 18:08:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

风来疏竹 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
风来疏竹 wrote:
远方的月亮

今年的三月有些忙乱
没能抽出空闲去约会春天
闻闻花香,看看柳绿
或者到你的耦园
采撷一片真情的天蓝

但我知道啊,我知道
春天将我包围着
春光在我的心底蔓延无限
我看到,那长长的海底电缆
也在春波里缠绵

谁说只有在你的梦里
残苞吐蕊
谁说只有在你的梦里
翠竹滴响

多少个不眠的夜啊
你啊,我远方的月亮
在我后院的小径上
伴我轻吟低唱

多少个分分秒秒啊
你啊,我远方的月亮
在我前庭的青石板上
满怀揽入你温馨的光

...


竹子,喜欢你的诗歌,真情, 自然, 感人.谢谢.羡慕你们东北军,好像天生会写诗歌似的, 诗坛有不少东北人:丢丢集团军,少君,海军,娇娇, 阿末,宝儿,,,,,,好多呢. Very Happy


水水,只要你喜欢就好。呵呵,这么多高水平的人,让偶愈加不敢提笔了。


问好竹子. 让我们随缘. 我总以为诗歌不可刻意而为也不可刻意而不为, 不想写就不写,想写时就信手涂鸦, 或许是我生来无大志? 别笑话我 Embarassed Razz
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白水
大学士


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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 18:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

娇娇 wrote:
纯洁真挚的友情!羡慕!祝福二位!


娇娇, 相信你们也会成为好朋友的,我偷偷赖在你们中间 Wink
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