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《上坟》《想起一些人》

刘浪
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Posted: 2009-03-17 00:43:31 Post subject: 《上坟》《想起一些人》

上坟同往年一样，跪在厚厚的雪上与冻土里的家人说些隔世的话依旧燃起黄纸，相互取暖等青烟散尽，纸钱微凉他们拣钱，我们磕头与往年不同的是，我只单手拄地腾出另一只挽住父亲生怕他一不留神，也扎进土里想起一些人刚一头扎进年关，就感觉到已被幸福轻轻咬住。回过头来看马三、王四，这两颗被而立不惑夹着的米粒，已不知去向马三的时风三轮和王四的赛豹轿车依旧从我眼前开过，我也像往常一样微笑着，朝里面的陌生人打一个招呼而后，幸福的牙齿，猛然扣紧 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-03-17 13:11:46 Post subject:

腾出另一只挽住父亲生怕他一不留神，也扎进土里看马三、王四，这两颗被而立不惑夹着的米粒，已不知去向幸福的牙齿，猛然扣紧非常生动。独特感觉。欣赏。作者对生活和语言都有深刻领悟！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-17 13:28:54 Post subject:

诙谐, 独特,简洁的文字, 展现出深刻, 睿智的内涵.

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Posted: 2009-03-18 17:14:07 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

腾出另一只挽住父亲
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谢谢韩老师鼓励。问好您。
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刘浪
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Posted: 2009-03-18 17:15:12 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

诙谐, 独特,简洁的文字, 展现出深刻, 睿智的内涵.

问好白水先生，谢谢鼓励。
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山城子
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Posted: 2009-03-18 17:24:33 Post subject:

隐忍的社会之痛！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2009-03-21 01:23:40 Post subject:

问候山城老师，感谢来读！ _________________ 是金子也会花光地

后现代刀子
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Posted: 2009-03-21 02:07:14 Post subject:

与往年不同的是，我只单手拄地腾出另一只挽住父亲生怕他一不留神，也扎进土里写的真好.我只能这样说了. 一个扎字.学习了 _________________ 88年的。

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Posted: 2009-03-21 19:32:28 Post subject:

朴实的文字很震动！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-03-22 17:08:20 Post subject:

后现代刀子 wrote:

与往年不同的是，我只单手拄地
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问好刀子，谢谢！我也在学习中，互勉。
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Posted: 2009-03-22 17:10:28 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

朴实的文字很震动！

问好晴宝。谢谢！您多批！
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安红红
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Posted: 2009-03-23 01:08:40 Post subject:

上坟同往年一样，跪在厚厚的雪上与冻土里的家人说些隔世的话依旧燃起黄纸，相互取暖等青烟散尽，纸钱微凉他们拣钱，我们磕头与往年不同的是，我只单手拄地腾出另一只挽住父亲生怕他一不留神，也扎进土里这首真不错~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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