后现代刀子
童生
Joined: 21 Feb 2009
Posts: 59
后现代刀子Collection |
 Posted: 2009-03-12 20:37:09 Post subject: 在厨房里想起我们的上一次吵架 |
 |
|
窗外繁琐的树枝和往事被砍伐
阳光爬进来，再一次看到我
激动地说不出一句话
明亮，我在厨房里
像一只金色的小松鼠那样忙碌
把你的笑容叠成立体的动词
叠成碗和茶杯
斟满雪，斟满咖啡
让纯洁的白和黑在甜中
栩栩如生。该是多么的美
暂且不管日子是怎样被削尖
划破年轻，凸显苍老
不管声音变得多么瓷质
又薄又脆
只要我们还能深爱，纵使
有疼，痛的细微
也再不会像刀子和刀子的会晤
毕竟，楚楚动人的冬天
最终是寒冷在温暖中结束 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 02:00:54 Post subject: |
|
|
| 斟满雪，斟满咖啡。 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
阿依琼裙
秀才
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
阿依琼裙Collection |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
吟啸徐行
举人
Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 1336
Location: 中国安徽
吟啸徐行Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 03:25:00 Post subject: |
|
|
生活中的诗意,尽显!
_________________
彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
后现代刀子
童生
Joined: 21 Feb 2009
Posts: 59
后现代刀子Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 15:49:10 Post subject: |
|
|
感谢赵大哥过来看我诗歌哈.有空多指导我哈.嘿嘿 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
后现代刀子
童生
Joined: 21 Feb 2009
Posts: 59
后现代刀子Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 15:51:45 Post subject: |
|
|
| 阿依琼裙 wrote: |
毕竟，楚楚动人的冬天
... |
琼姐,谢谢你这样支持我.要不我早就放弃希望了.嘿嘿
你特敞亮,特帅.
然后我会坚持走下去的.这写诗歌的日子还是挺美好的哈 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
后现代刀子
童生
Joined: 21 Feb 2009
Posts: 59
后现代刀子Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 15:55:22 Post subject: |
|
|
谢谢徐行哈.
看过你的诗歌,也蛮生活的哈.
诗歌应该是不能脱离生活的吧.嘿嘿 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
后现代刀子
童生
Joined: 21 Feb 2009
Posts: 59
后现代刀子Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-13 15:56:37 Post subject: |
|
|
谢谢冲浪斑竹.
最好还是继续流动,要不我就死了?
哈哈 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2009-03-15 02:00:25 Post subject: |
|
|
新颖的标题把我拽进来偷听  |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Sign in
Album
