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笨妹妹
cyansharp
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 22:40:56    Post subject: 笨妹妹 Reply with quote

笨妹妹

(一)
噢 笨妹妹
月亮的脸盘
银样的身
坐在哪棵树上梦自己

你骑一头白象
去哪里
赶着春天的白老虎
做什么

(二)
噢 笨妹妹
风将你嫁往雪山的道路上
饥肠辘辘的马群
啃尽了你头上的星光

你 勇敢走向
没有你的地方
即使爱 不再
成就你的肉身

(三)
噢 笨妹妹
雨 急雨
十万支春天的箭
在海上向你齐射

你不逃也不哭
你就在那里
就在阳光的栅栏里
像一只令人心碎的刺猬

(四)
噢 笨妹妹
你今生的真理
是你的意念
无法登上的绝壁

在恨中折断恨
在爱中加倍爱
爱 如此无用
恨 这么有效

(五)
噢 笨妹妹
你的月亮历经黑夜的磨难
万鸟之喙衔来黎明的水面
而你却沉入你的大海

我的笨妹妹
细数你充满奥义的睫毛
苦难的发辫
和花枝开放的气息

(六)
噢 笨妹妹
我必将呼唤雷暴
劈开大海废墟的诅咒
抱着你的腰身救起剑

在春天原野的花茎上
仔细辨认你的衣衫
日复一日
永不厌倦

(七)
噢 笨妹妹
在你等待白马的夜晚
暴风雪在我的颅内
化成送别记忆的马蹄

卧在你背上
春天的马蹄
比爱情还要新鲜
还要远

2009.1.22

后记:《笨妹妹七章》是写给春风里或行或飞或沉睡的嫣然之花。而笨是一种执着,一种命运的状态,妹妹是一盏亮在我血脉里的灯。请博友勿要转载,期待花朵与笨妹妹不期而遇。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 23:05:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

月亮的脸盘
银样的身
坐在哪棵树上梦自己

多有精彩之笔
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cyansharp
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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 17:53:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
月亮的脸盘
银样的身
坐在哪棵树上梦自己

多有精彩之笔
感谢和平岛君的垂顾和照耀。恭祝新春快乐。
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-02 18:31:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

在恨中折断恨
在爱中加倍爱
爱 如此无用
恨 这么有效

情感充沛,许多精彩之处~欣赏,问候春节!问候春天的妹妹!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-02 20:01:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

还是苯点好

问好新春
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:02:26    Post subject: 感谢半溪月明君垂顾 Reply with quote

感谢半溪月明君垂顾,请多批评指引。祝福远握。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:04:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢半溪月明君垂顾,希望多指引批评。祝福远握。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:06:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢白水君垂顾,奉茶来迟,祝福春天好!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:09:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

韵味十足,学习
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:14:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢立士君垂顾,上座奉茶。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 00:18:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

cyansharp wrote:
感谢半溪月明君垂顾,希望多指引批评。祝福远握。
远握!
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魏鵬展
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PostPosted: 2009-04-16 03:27:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

很創新的寫法。
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