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养一钵水仙
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 00:22:48    Post subject: 养一钵水仙 Reply with quote

《养一钵水仙》

养一钵水仙
对一个人的处境
不会有多大改观
对提升一个人的命运
更有些徒然
但你坚持把它放在窗台
一尺只隔
每日 添些许清水
执著地等待水仙花开

就算水仙花开了
五六朵素葩
七八缕淡香
清纯一室
一个人一生中的最难
往往就一个冬季
甚至更短
你只想让水仙陪你
熬过低谷

《水仙花开了》

那株水仙花开了
肯定不是我催的
尽管我期待了多日
水仙花站在一钵水中
水很浅
却是她不能自拔的深
就像缘分 有时几滴
就能让一个人沉溺

水仙花沉溺在她的绿
她的花朵
她素淡的清香
我怎么喊
她也走不出来

水仙花沉溺一钵清水中
像一个人牢牢屹立自己的爱
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 00:51:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

水仙花沉溺在她的绿
她的花朵
她素淡的清香
我怎么喊
她也走不出来

水仙花沉溺一钵清水中
像一个人牢牢屹立自己的爱

啧啧。。。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 06:04:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

第二首~绝对的美~喜欢~~

水很浅
却是她不能自拔的深
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