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过年 几只无助的麻雀(外2首)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 20:42:01    Post subject: 过年 几只无助的麻雀(外2首) Reply with quote

过年 几只无助的麻雀

鱼肉的香味 连绵不绝
几只麻雀 却饥肠辘辘
一地鞭炮的碎屑芬芳极了
但无法入口

河堤上 许多人在烧纸钱和冥钞
也被风吹得四处翻飞
但没有一张 属于麻雀

大年三十 家家户户忙过年
整座城市忙过年
惟有几只麻雀很无奈
也很无助 我不知道
麻雀的年 藏在何处

再过一会儿
我的手机会短信连连
那么多祝福
那么多问候
我一条也不能回给麻雀

乡村记事

我的脸燃亮桃花
我不能说我已交上好运
但我敢断言
我的乡村已春回大地
屋角垂挂触地的骄阳
屋顶落满麻雀的欢噪
不论它们唱得动听不动听
我都不会打扰

麻雀离去之后
燕子会来 黄鹂会来
草长莺飞 河水织绿田野
一头系着牧笛悠悠
一头系着蛙鼓 
和谐电闪雷鸣
也和谐风清 月圆
我的影子不知不觉压弯小桥

捡爆竹筒的老人

这一天比任何一天都让她高兴
那么多人搬出爆竹
安放在大地的寂静里

爆竹声停 她冲过去
来来回回 忙得满头大汗
忙得忘了今天是过年
忙得让我看见她的手 她的脸
比过年更像过年
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 21:08:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

同好麻雀。
据我体会,这样的人,很有同情心。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 01:42:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢第一首~怜悯的情怀~忧而不伤~

乡村记事充满欣然眷恋~

问好~

排版可以更漂亮些~标题加上<>或者《》~
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