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赋别离

nobody
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Posted: 2007-02-21 11:48:53 Post subject: 赋别离

赋别离 91,10 倦了，斜向情人望不足醉了，犹用指甲挑酒喝美人，美人枉为我垂泪我却恋着那沙上风光，海中岁月倦了，遂将玫瑰分数瓣醉了，犹用花瓣蘸酒喝美人，美人枉为我太息我却恋着那鸟乖兽侠，花大树硕倦了，散发遮却半面愁醉了，犹用头发汲酒喝美人，美人枉为我凝恨我却恋着那石诡穴奇，山空月多 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

nobody
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Posted: 2007-02-21 11:55:15 Post subject:

不深刻，送人的，当年离开时。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-02-21 17:58:33 Post subject:

鲜花美酒, 对月吟歌. 却因美人枉为我凝恨流出几分凄凉来......

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2007-02-22 20:40:44 Post subject:

实际上别总是那样“深刻”。清风清泉，润心润肺，不也挺好：） _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

nobody
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Posted: 2007-02-23 00:18:05 Post subject:

多谢白水沙漠。只有深刻才能给浅薄发许可证呀，那，就将浅薄进行到底吧。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2007-02-23 00:42:43 Post subject:

几分凄美和壮烈谁说男儿不多情 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

或云或马：贺铭
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-02-23 01:51:07 Post subject:

nobody朋友好，小弟特来道谢，呵呵。老兄的诗可是透着诡异啊！有味道。 _________________ 一只乱风中的风筝努力保持着平衡他胆怯他脆弱他想摆脱于是他不停地向上可是上面还是风更乱更强

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Posted: 2007-02-23 02:18:15 Post subject:

或云或马：贺铭 wrote:

老兄的诗可是透着诡异啊！

谢谢。哈哈，放心吧，我本人没那末诡。 Laughing

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