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乖,谁的评论
陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 17:58:50    Post subject: 乖,谁的评论 Reply with quote

乖,谁的评论

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看完文章,身上所有的器官都在呼吸,想你
它们也有生命,去陌生的地方给自己放假
辗转火车,汽车;火车,汽车的走。打开那页
不知想要去哪里。眼神空洞,脚步迟疑,缓慢

一阶又一阶地登山梯,山顶的风景如何。气喘
身体状况早已不适应剧烈的运动。还是老了?
休息一下,又上几级,心脏快要跳出,有些晕

上到723级,陡峭的石阶直插蓝天。脚下一滑
怕摔下去,跌到山谷又如何?搀扶,登上山顶
坐在一块突出的青石上,遥望家乡的方向
不觉泪湿眼眶,家在哪里?心在哪里?我爱你

山风,呼呼吹,有些凉,山谷蜿蜒地伸向远方
那边,该是谁的家乡。躲藏,还是逃避
爱还是恨。纠缠不清,欲罢不能,沉迷久了
投入的欲望。早已把我网住,还需要知道过去?
一个需要关爱的女孩,美丽易碎,如黄色硫璃

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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 20:28:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个需要关爱的女孩,美丽易碎,如黄色硫璃
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 00:30:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

一味的叙述不好,况且和题目也没有关联。
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陈子寒
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 01:47:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

看完文章,身上所有的器官都在呼吸,想你
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文立冰
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 05:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

宁静的叙述喜读!
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