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爱与牵手:寂寞的一个人与月光的对话(二)
黄凌
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 22:24:02    Post subject: 爱与牵手:寂寞的一个人与月光的对话(二) Reply with quote

假如寂寞耒自于黄昏
欢悦的便是铭刻颤唱
也许这声音
滋生轻柔月光

月光下一个男人
抑望天空上的月儿
心中溢满了
岁月流逝的浪花
渴望里装上缥缈而期待的
久别了的思念

窒息的寂寞中
撑起天空飘升的风筝
沃土缠绕眚温情
奔流在畅想的河床
情感之水
瞬间冶炼为月光
遗忘的风景

也许寂寞留在了
枯树荒野
密林心脏
从赤裸的呻吟里
燃烧夕阳的光芒
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 00:27:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

没有出现对话的境界,还处于独白阶段。
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