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五言古绝一首《望月有怀》（旧作）！

南之北
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Posted: 2008-12-29 01:32:18 Post subject: 五言古绝一首《望月有怀》（旧作）！

望月有怀（古绝）作者：南之北月色清如洗，郁然起孤意。念兹远行人，独坐秋风里。

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Posted: 2008-12-29 03:56:31 Post subject:

独坐秋风,望月怀远,意境清幽,思绪绵长. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

南之北
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Posted: 2008-12-29 04:02:40 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

独坐秋风,望月怀远,意境清幽,思绪绵长.

谢先生雅评，问好！

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Posted: 2009-01-13 17:33:03 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-01-14 03:06:56 Post subject:

秋风洗秋月，古道正凛冽。家在千万里，问讯风尘塞。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

南之北
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Posted: 2009-01-14 17:23:32 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

秋风洗秋月，古道正凛冽。家在千万里，问讯风尘塞。

谢临贴并和诗，问好！

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Posted: 2009-01-14 17:35:05 Post subject:

南之北 wrote:

望月有怀（古绝）
...

和南之北望月有怀

岁月波涛洗，人生难尽意。
诗书伴远行，笑傲长风里。

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Posted: 2009-01-15 20:15:47 Post subject:

谢qinghongh兄赐和诗，问好！ _________________ 我的诗词吾爱网个人主页：http://www.52shici.com/space.php?mem_id=6419

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Posted: 2009-01-25 01:35:15 Post subject: 五绝望月有怀

南之北 wrote:

望月有怀（古绝）
...

和南之北望月有怀，给诗友问好！

五绝望月有怀

朗月和风洗，高悬知我意。
诗书舞乐情，只影阑珊里。
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Posted: 2009-01-25 03:02:54 Post subject:

lulu wrote:

南之北 wrote:

望月有怀（古绝）
...

和南之北望月有怀（古绝），给诗友问好！
...

欢迎LULU, 新春快乐 Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-01-25 04:03:19 Post subject:

lulu
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Posted: 2009-01-25 06:18:46 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

lulu wrote:

南之北 wrote:

望月有怀（古绝）
...

和南之北望月有怀（古绝），给诗友问好！
...

欢迎LULU, 新春快乐 Very Happy

谢谢白水 Moonlight ！

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Posted: 2009-01-27 21:33:33 Post subject:

南之北，这个名字很怪。

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Posted: 2009-01-28 20:12:12 Post subject:

望月有怀（古绝）作者：南之北月色清如洗，郁然起孤意。念兹远行人，独坐秋风里。呵呵，意境好凄冷啊

南之北
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Posted: 2009-01-31 23:49:17 Post subject:

lulu wrote:

和南之北望月有怀，给诗友问好！

五绝望月有怀

朗月和风洗，高悬知我意。
诗书舞乐情，只影阑珊里。

谢lulu赐和诗，欢迎新朋友！

南之北
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Posted: 2009-01-31 23:53:27 Post subject:

暗浮烟 wrote:

南之北，这个名字很怪。

呵呵，一个笔名而已，和我所处的地理位置有关。
谢兄临贴，问新年好！

南之北
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Posted: 2009-01-31 23:57:38 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

呵呵，意境好凄冷啊

凄冷应不至于，对月怀人，应是一份清幽的思绪。
谢秋版欣赏，问新年好！

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