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《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
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PostPosted: 2013-09-19 22:17:01    Post subject: 《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》 Reply with quote

《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
又是秋凉叶落时,中天明镜照心池。
持醅抬望终长啸,顾影无眠步未移。

人远别, 鹤东飞, 知音万里返无期。
孤帆江海归途后, 春树暮云重赋词。
2013 中秋

春树暮云——著名表示友情词组,典故自杜甫《春日亿李白》,
白也诗无敌,飘然思不群。
清新庾开府,俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树,江东日暮云。
何时一樽酒,重与细论文。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-20 00:40:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
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情深意重,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-20 05:02:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

中秋怀良友,万里寄知音。好词!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-20 05:15:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶兄中秋好词,诗人变词人。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-21 06:58:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏学习,问好!节日快乐!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-23 05:34:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

Daxia wrote:
秋叶 wrote:
《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
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情深意重,学习了。


谢谢赏读,有空一聚。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-23 05:38:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
中秋怀良友,万里寄知音。好词!


谢谢黄老师,习惯了每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程,近安!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-23 05:40:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

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秋叶兄中秋好词,诗人变词人。


不求此名,只是龙虾易得,知音难求,敝作是写给查理兄的,希望他万里之外一切顺利。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-23 05:42:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
欣赏学习,问好!节日快乐!


谢谢笑聊兄,你是大家,望多斧正。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-02 20:10:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
欣赏学习,问好!节日快乐!


谢谢笑聊兄,你是大家,望多斧正。


问好秋叶兄!出去几日,迟复致歉!

在师友们面前,只有学习,学习、、、一看到“大家”这个字眼,立马感到坐立不安、、、秋叶兄您就放过我吧!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-03 08:35:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy 等你的古巴寄友
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PostPosted: 2013-10-03 11:20:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-10-04 00:53:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

很深邃“心池”写照。欣赏。
问候秋斑!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 12:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

有一个中秋月饼的广告词说,每年至少吃一次。秋叶兄每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程。
年年岁岁月饼相似,岁岁年年诗却不同。难能可贵。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-13 01:23:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy 等你的古巴寄友


白水兄,到古巴海边是为了离尘放松,无法寄友,有空写一篇游记共赏 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-10-13 01:24:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy


谢谢MM
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PostPosted: 2013-10-13 01:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

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很深邃“心池”写照。欣赏。
问候秋斑!

谢谢冰清老师赏读,近安!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-13 01:30:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
有一个中秋月饼的广告词说,每年至少吃一次。秋叶兄每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程。
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晓松兄,知音啊,有空一聚。
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PostPosted: 2013-11-06 10:18:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

“又是秋凉叶落时,中天明镜照心池。”

欣赏。
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