秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-19 22:17:01 Post subject: 《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》 |
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《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
又是秋凉叶落时,中天明镜照心池。
持醅抬望终长啸,顾影无眠步未移。
人远别, 鹤东飞, 知音万里返无期。
孤帆江海归途后, 春树暮云重赋词。
2013 中秋
春树暮云——著名表示友情词组,典故自杜甫《春日亿李白》,
白也诗无敌,飘然思不群。
清新庾开府,俊逸鲍参军。
渭北春天树,江东日暮云。
何时一樽酒,重与细论文。 |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2013-09-20 00:40:36 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
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情深意重,学习了。 _________________ Daxia |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-09-20 05:02:00 Post subject: |
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中秋怀良友,万里寄知音。好词! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-09-20 05:15:15 Post subject: |
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秋叶兄中秋好词,诗人变词人。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-09-21 06:58:12 Post subject: |
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欣赏学习,问好!节日快乐! |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-23 05:34:18 Post subject: |
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Daxia wrote: |
秋叶 wrote: |
《鹧鸪天 . 中秋寄友》
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情深意重,学习了。 |
谢谢赏读,有空一聚。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-23 05:38:07 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
中秋怀良友,万里寄知音。好词! |
谢谢黄老师,习惯了每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程,近安! |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-23 05:40:20 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
秋叶兄中秋好词,诗人变词人。 |
不求此名,只是龙虾易得,知音难求,敝作是写给查理兄的,希望他万里之外一切顺利。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-23 05:42:15 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄,你是大家,望多斧正。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-02 20:10:22 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
谢谢笑聊兄,你是大家,望多斧正。 |
问好秋叶兄!出去几日,迟复致歉!
在师友们面前,只有学习,学习、、、一看到“大家”这个字眼,立马感到坐立不安、、、秋叶兄您就放过我吧! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-03 08:35:20 Post subject: |
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等你的古巴寄友 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-03 11:20:27 Post subject: |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2013-10-04 00:53:33 Post subject: |
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很深邃“心池”写照。欣赏。
问候秋斑! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-10-05 12:23:49 Post subject: |
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有一个中秋月饼的广告词说,每年至少吃一次。秋叶兄每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程。
年年岁岁月饼相似,岁岁年年诗却不同。难能可贵。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-13 01:23:50 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
等你的古巴寄友 |
白水兄,到古巴海边是为了离尘放松,无法寄友,有空写一篇游记共赏  |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-13 01:24:37 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
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谢谢MM |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-13 01:26:05 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
很深邃“心池”写照。欣赏。
问候秋斑! |
谢谢冰清老师赏读,近安! |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-13 01:30:25 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
有一个中秋月饼的广告词说,每年至少吃一次。秋叶兄每年中秋都草上一首,以记历程。
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晓松兄,知音啊,有空一聚。 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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